Toby Finds His Donated Coat on a Dead Marine
Plot Beats
The narrative micro-steps within this event
The officer reveals the deceased man's face and asks Toby if he recognizes him, to which Toby responds negatively.
The officer provides the deceased man's name, Walter Hufnagle, and mentions an expired driver's license from 1973, but Toby still doesn't recognize him.
The officer reveals that the deceased had Toby's business card, leading Toby to realize the man was wearing his donated coat.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Casual and perfunctory on the surface; emotionally distant and constrained by departmental triage priorities.
Stationed at the bench as the on‑scene D.C. officer: he exposes the man's face, reads the expired license aloud, extracts and announces Toby's business card, covers the body again, and treats removal/notification as routine low priority.
- • Follow police protocol for an unattended death and keep the scene under minimal supervision.
- • Defer further action to ambulance/coroner/dispatch without escalating or delaying other duties.
- • This is a non‑criminal unattended death and should be handled by routine municipal procedures.
- • Resource triage matters: this does not merit immediate, extraordinary response.
Troubled and quietly determined — initial bewilderment gives way to dawning responsibility and indignation at institutional indifference.
Approaches the scene, identifies himself as Toby Zeigler, inspects the blanket‑covered man, recognizes his donated coat and the business card, points out the Marine tattoo, and reacts with mounting comprehension and moral discomfort.
- • Determine who the man is and why the coat with his card is on him.
- • Ensure the deceased veteran receives proper recognition and that appropriate agencies (V.A./military) are notified.
- • Personal traces (my coat, my card) create moral obligation.
- • Institutions (coroner, police, V.A.) ought to care for veterans and the dead, and failure to do so needs correction.
Physically inert; emotionally present only as the silent evidence of civic neglect and the past service he represents.
Lying on the bench covered by a blanket and wearing Toby's donated coat; identified by an expired license and a Marine tattoo. He functions as the silent focal point whose anonymity and military service catalyze Toby's moral response.
- • By implication: to be recognized for service and to receive dignity in death.
- • To function as a catalyst for others' responsibility (i.e., compel the living to act with honor).
- • Had he lived: military service confers entitlement to recognition and benefits.
- • In death: being on a memorial bench should awaken civic obligations in passersby.
Objects Involved
Significant items in this scene
The expired driver's license is produced as primary documentary identification: the officer reads 'Hufnagle, Walter' aloud, supplying the dead man's name and anchoring the scene in concrete personal history.
Toby's business card, found inside the donated coat, functions as the narrative linchpin connecting the White House aide to the anonymous corpse. The officer announces it, which shifts the encounter from incidental to personally implicating for Toby.
The D.C. Park Ambulance is referenced as the routine removal vehicle that will take the body away; its mention underscores municipal procedure and the officer's low‑priority handling of the scene.
A pale blanket initially conceals the deceased body; the officer pulls it back to reveal the man's face and later replaces it. It operates narratively as a physical veil that, when lifted, forces the characters (and audience) to confront death and anonymity.
The weathered memorial bench is the physical site where the deceased lies and where the interaction happens. It anchors the scene in public space and contrasts ceremonial memory with present neglect.
The overcoat Toby donated is physically on the deceased and narratively transforms from a private possession into the connective tissue that obliges Toby: it proves a chain of custody from donor to Goodwill to the dead veteran.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
The Korean War Memorial frames the whole encounter: monuments, benches and early morning visitors create a ceremonial context that heightens the shame of an unattended veteran's death and compels a moral response from Toby.
The specific memorial bench is the immediate stage for discovery: a worn, public seat that holds the body and anchors the officer's brief examination and Toby's dawning moral urgency.
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Key Dialogue
"OFFICER: "He also had your business card.""
"TOBY: "Well, that's my coat. I gave that coat to the Goodwill. There must have been a...""
"TOBY: "[points] Tattoo on his forearm is Marine Battalion Second of the Seventh. This guy was in Korea.""