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S1E10 · In Excelsis Deo

Holiday Banter to Ethical Standoff

Donna's playful Christmas list opens the beat — a light, flirtatious moment that reveals Josh's distracted, evasive state when he crumples her note out of sight. He rushes to Leo, pushing for a preemptive strike to blunt Lillienfield's holiday-timed leak. Leo refuses outright on ethical grounds, pivoting the office toward a public, values-based response instead (a press balloon on a brutal Minnesota hate crime). The scene flips tone from domestic levity to moral conflict and sets up Josh's emotional compromises and the administration's principled posture.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Donna greets Josh in the festively decorated bullpen, handing him a list of ski equipment she wants for Christmas, highlighting their playful yet routine dynamic.

casual to playful ['festively decorated bullpen']

Josh crumples Donna's list after she leaves, revealing his dismissive attitude toward her request, then seeks Leo to discuss a more pressing issue.

playful to dismissive ['hallway', "Margaret's office"]

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Weary but resolute; morally steady and impatient with tactical shortcuts that compromise institutional integrity.

Leo receives Josh in his office, listens curtly to Josh's pitch for a preemptive strike, and rejects the tactic outright. He reframes the problem by recounting the Minnesota hate crime and orders a principled, public approach (C.J.'s test balloon), asserting institutional ethics over tactical expedience.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent the administration from engaging in unethical preemptive political tactics
  • Steer the staff toward a values-based public response to current crises
  • Protect the President and the institution from compromised information practices
Active beliefs
  • The administration must not stoop to dirty political tricks even when provoked
  • Moral clarity and public leadership will serve long-term institutional credibility
  • Some crises require policy responses (hate crimes) rather than tactical counter-moves
Character traits
Principled Authoritative Blunt Strategic in moral framing
Follow Leo Thomas …'s journey

Resigned and tired; emotionally spent from performing ritual holiday tasks for others, with little patience for interruptions.

Margaret manages holiday logistics in Leo's office, struggling with a skipping pen and a clipboard; she performs administrative labor, supplies procedural friction, and exits after an impatient exchange, signaling exhaustion with holiday duties.

Goals in this moment
  • Complete the holiday card-signing operation efficiently
  • Keep the office's ceremonial tasks on schedule
  • Support Leo's directives by managing logistics
Active beliefs
  • Holiday tasks must be executed regardless of underlying staff tensions
  • Administrative chores provide a necessary veneer of normalcy
  • Practical completion of duties keeps senior staff focused
Character traits
Efficient Weary Procedural Impatiently dutiful
Follow Margaret Hooper's journey

Distracted and jittery; surface levity masks a heightened anxiety and moral compromise as he contemplates aggressive tactical options.

Josh accepts the list and reads it aloud with teasing; after Donna turns away he furtively crumples the paper and drops it into the bullpen wastebasket, then immediately seeks Leo to press for a preemptive political move to blunt a damaging leak from Representative Lillienfield.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent Lillienfield's damaging information from hitting the public at an inopportune time
  • Secure permission for a preemptive strike or at least permission to investigate the leak
  • Avoid burdening Donna (hide his distracted state) while pushing the operation forward
Active beliefs
  • Preemptive tactical leaks can blunt or control political damage
  • Speed and initiative trump waiting for the opposition to set the agenda
  • The ethical lines can be stretched in service of protecting the administration
Character traits
Evasive Anxious Politically opportunistic Protective of the administration (practically-minded)
Follow Joshua Lyman's journey
Donna Moss
primary

Warm and hopeful, lightly flirtatious; emotionally available and reasonably secure in her relationship with Josh.

Donna approaches Josh cheerfully in the decorated bullpen, offers a handwritten Christmas list and flirts about skis and gifts; she leaves believing the exchange was playful and personal, unaware Josh has just crumpled her list.

Goals in this moment
  • Signal interest and intimacy through a personal holiday gift list
  • Get Josh to choose a gift (and potentially deepen their relationship)
  • Create a light, domestic beat amid workplace stress
Active beliefs
  • Josh cares about her and will respond to a clear hint
  • A playful, tangible list will make it easier for him to buy a thoughtful gift
  • Office holiday rituals are a safe space for personal exchanges
Character traits
Playful Affectionate Direct Naive to Josh's political anxiety
Follow Donna Moss's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Leo McGarry's Clipboard

Leo's clipboard is the emblem of office order sitting with Margaret; it anchors the holiday administrative ritual and signals the ongoing business of the West Wing even as ethical crises are argued.

Before: On Margaret's person/hand, loaded with cards and memos …
After: Taken by Margaret as she exits to her …
Before: On Margaret's person/hand, loaded with cards and memos related to holiday tasks and signings.
After: Taken by Margaret as she exits to her office to continue administrative duties; remains an instrument of procedure rather than political maneuvering.
Donna's Christmas List

Donna's small handwritten Christmas list functions as the intimate prop that opens the scene's domestic register; its transfer to Josh, his private crumpling, and final disposal visually register his divided attention and escalating dishonesty.

Before: In Donna's possession, neatly folded, carried to Josh …
After: Crumpled and discarded into Josh's bullpen wastebasket, hidden …
Before: In Donna's possession, neatly folded, carried to Josh as a playful, earnest token.
After: Crumpled and discarded into Josh's bullpen wastebasket, hidden from Donna and used to symbolize Josh's emotional withdrawal.
Josh's Bullpen Wastebasket (Bullpen — S1E10)

The bullpen wastebasket is the concealment device for Josh's immediate, secretive reaction — he drops Donna's crumpled list inside to hide his true feelings and to dramatize the fissure between private truth and public gesture.

Before: Scuffed and containing ordinary office detritus (cups, paper …
After: Now also contains Donna's crumpled Christmas list, a …
Before: Scuffed and containing ordinary office detritus (cups, paper scraps) in its usual location in Josh's bullpen.
After: Now also contains Donna's crumpled Christmas list, a small physical trace of Josh's evasiveness added to its contents.
Minnesota Crime-Scene Tree (Site of Assault)

The Minnesota crime‑scene tree is referenced by Leo as the physical site where the victim was tied; it is not present but functions narratively as the concrete, gruesome evidence that reframes the political choice toward public moral leadership.

Before: Physically located at the remote Minnesota crime scene, …
After: Remains at the crime scene; in the event …
Before: Physically located at the remote Minnesota crime scene, bearing abrasions and likely evidentiary marks.
After: Remains at the crime scene; in the event it is invoked as a moral catalyst that pushes the administration toward legislative and communicative action.
Improvised Throwing Rocks (Scene Evidence — Stones Used as Weapons)

Improvised throwing rocks are invoked by Leo as the blunt instruments used against the Minnesota victim; they serve as visceral details that make the assault vivid and morally urgent in the eyes of staff.

Before: Located at the Minnesota crime scene as used …
After: Physically unchanged at the scene; rhetorically present in …
Before: Located at the Minnesota crime scene as used weapons—gritty, irregular stones.
After: Physically unchanged at the scene; rhetorically present in the West Wing as part of the case that demands policy attention.
Broken Glass Bottles (Scene Evidence — Improvised Weapons)

Broken glass bottles are named as the objects hurled at the victim; like the rocks and the tree, they translate remote brutality into a moral argument that Leo uses to justify a public, values-based response.

Before: At the Minnesota scene, battered and partly broken …
After: Remain at the crime scene; their mention in …
Before: At the Minnesota scene, battered and partly broken as evidence of the assault.
After: Remain at the crime scene; their mention in the office shifts the policy conversation and public messaging strategy.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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West Wing Corridor (Exterior Hallway Outside Leo McGarry's Office)

The West Wing hallway functions as the transitional artery between the bullpen and Leo's office; it carries the tonal shift physically as Josh moves from a flirtatious exchange into a confidential, urgent confrontation.

Atmosphere A brisk, echoing passage where casual conversation gives way to sharp purpose as footsteps and …
Function Transitional space for escalation — the literal corridor between casuality and command.
Symbolism A liminal conduit where private moments are quickly forced into institutional corridors of power.
Access Open circulation area for staff, monitored by Secret Service protocols but functionally accessible to aides.
Polished walls and brisk footsteps Quick exchanges and visible movement between offices
Leo McGarry's Office (Chief of Staff's Office)

Leo's office is the concentrated battleground for ethical judgment: holiday presents and a clipboard create domestic set dressing while Leo articulates a principled refusal of covert tactics, reframing the crisis as a moral and policy imperative.

Atmosphere Tightly controlled, domestically warm yet tense — a quiet authority undercut by weary resolve.
Function Decision chamber where institutional lines are drawn and where Leo exerts moral leadership.
Symbolism Embodies the tension between personal warmth (presents) and the cold responsibilities of power; a crown …
Access Senior staff only; private executive office with limited, purposeful entrance.
Brightly wrapped Christmas presents on the table Margaret holding a clipboard and fiddling with a pen Low, deliberate speech and interrupted pauses
West Wing Communications Bullpen (White House Communications Office)

Josh's festively decorated bullpen is the stage for the scene's opening domestic banter; it contrasts holiday levity with the urgent political pressure that follows and provides the physical spot where Donna's personal note is handed off and then secretly discarded.

Atmosphere Light, amused, cluttered with holiday decorations and office bustle that suddenly feels incongruous with rising …
Function Meeting ground and emotional foil — a neutral, informal workspace where private and professional lives …
Symbolism Represents the tension between personal intimacy and professional compromise; holiday cheer as a fragile veneer …
Access Open to staff; informal public workspace with no special restrictions.
Festive decorations and holiday clutter Several staffers working in the background Ambient office noise (phones, chatter)

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 2
Character Continuity medium

"Josh's dismissive attitude toward Donna's Christmas list contrasts sharply with his later heartfelt gift, showing his emotional growth and the deepening of their relationship."

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Character Continuity medium

"Josh's dismissive attitude toward Donna's Christmas list contrasts sharply with his later heartfelt gift, showing his emotional growth and the deepening of their relationship."

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Key Dialogue

"JOSH: "Lillienfield's got this information. He's gonna hold it till after Christmas when people are watching. I don't want to tell you too much, but I want to make an attempt at a preemptive strike.""
"LEO: "I don't want it in my pocket. I don't want it in your pocket, Sam's pocket, and I sure don't want it in the President's pocket.""
"LEO: "You hear about this kid in Minnesota? A gay high school senior. He got beaten up, then they stripped him naked, tied him to a tree and threw rocks and bottles at his head. You know how old the assailants were? Thirteen.""