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S1E10 · In Excelsis Deo

Dial Down the Rhetoric

In C.J.'s office at night a playful moment with Danny dissolves into a serious policy spat when Leo instructs C.J. to 'dial down the rhetoric' on hate-crimes. C.J. answers with vivid, moral fury—calling the murder a 'crime of entertainment' and arguing for outrage—while Leo pushes political caution, reminding her he only asked for a test balloon. The exchange crystallizes the season's conflict between ethical urgency and electoral risk, then softens into a quiet human beat when C.J. offers to cook for Leo at Christmas, revealing their personal bond beneath the disagreement.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Leo interrupts C.J. and Danny's exchange, shifting the scene's focus as he instructs C.J. to dial back her rhetoric on hate crimes, highlighting the administration's internal conflict.

lightheartedness to professional tension

C.J. pushes back on Leo's directive, passionately defending the need to address hate crimes, exposing the moral versus political dilemma within the White House.

frustration to reluctant compliance

The scene ends with a shift to personal conversation as C.J. offers to cook for Leo on Christmas, briefly softening the tension before Leo departs.

professional tension to warm concern

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Righteously indignant and grief‑charged while arguing; afterward more conciliatory and quietly concerned—anger gives way to weary care.

Leaning against her desk, she moves from playfulness (reading her list, ripping open a tiny gift) into a pitched moral argument: she names the killing in vivid terms, broadens it into a cultural diagnosis, then, after Leo's request, softens into an intimate offer to cook for him at Christmas.

Goals in this moment
  • To publicly name and condemn the moral depravity behind the murder and demand moral clarity.
  • To resist institutional smoothing that would sanitize or minimize the crime's significance.
  • To preserve her credibility and moral voice as Press Secretary while navigating Leo's command.
Active beliefs
  • That rhetoric matters and public language should call out hate explicitly.
  • That the murder is symptomatic of deeper social pathologies that must be named, not minimized.
  • That political caution often silences urgent moral truths.
Character traits
moralistic fiery principled combative capaciously compassionate
Follow C.J. Cregg's journey

Playful and hopeful at first, then slightly awkward and deferential as he exits to give space to senior staff.

Begins the scene seated and amused, offers a small, intimate gift and a confession, then collects his coat and leaves when Carol announces Leo's arrival—a private witness to the tonal shift but not an active participant in the policy dispute.

Goals in this moment
  • To create a private, affectionate moment with C.J. via a small gift and confession.
  • To avoid interfering with White House business once senior staff arrive.
  • To leave gracefully without escalating the developing policy exchange.
Active beliefs
  • That personal connections and small gestures matter, even amid political life.
  • That the H.W. workplace has boundaries that should be respected when leadership intervenes.
Character traits
flirtatious lighthearted observant respectful
Follow Danny Concannon's journey

Calm, controlled, slightly weary; exercising steady authority while masking the weight of political risk.

Enters from the doorway, intercepts the private exchange, and delivers a measured, authoritative instruction to 'dial down the rhetoric.' He frames his request as operational caution, refuses to be drawn into moral grandstanding, then departs after a brief, almost paternal, moment of banter with C.J.

Goals in this moment
  • To manage institutional and political risk by damping incendiary public language.
  • To keep options open while testing public reaction ('float a test balloon').
  • To protect the President and staff from polarizing fallout.
Active beliefs
  • That measured rhetoric preserves political maneuverability.
  • That legislation or public posture must consider a divided audience, including internal staff.
  • That leadership sometimes requires tempering moral outrage to avoid unintended consequences.
Character traits
pragmatic protective institutionally minded conciliatory decisive
Follow Leo Thomas …'s journey
Supporting 1

Businesslike and focused; neutral emotionally but attentive to the needs of workflow and chain of command.

Appears in the doorway to interrupt the private moment, calmly informs C.J. that Leo is present, functioning as the pragmatic conduit of information that shifts the scene toward formal business.

Goals in this moment
  • To ensure C.J. is aware of Leo's presence so the conversation can be appropriately redirected.
  • To maintain orderly flow of information into C.J.'s office during a sensitive night.
  • To protect her principal from surprises and preserve professional protocol.
Active beliefs
  • That prompt, clear information-sharing keeps the communications operation functioning.
  • That senior staff presence changes conversational stakes and must be signaled quickly.
Character traits
efficient discreet practical attentive
Follow Carol Fitzpatrick's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Crinkled Gift Wrapping Paper (wrapping for Danny's goldfish gift)

Crinkled wrapping paper functions as the reveal device: C.J. rips it open to disclose the trivial gift, heightening intimacy and levity; the torn paper visually marks the transition from private play to professional interruption.

Before: Intact around the small cylinder within Danny's coat …
After: Torn and discarded on the desk or nearby …
Before: Intact around the small cylinder within Danny's coat pocket.
After: Torn and discarded on the desk or nearby surface after the reveal.
Danny's Cylinder Goldfish Food Container (pocket gift, S1E10 'In Excelsis Deo')

A palm-sized cylinder (goldfish food) is produced from Danny's coat as a small, intimate Christmas gift. It punctures the night's seriousness with domestic humor and prompts a private, human moment before Leo's arrival shifts the tone to policy.

Before: Wrapped and concealed in Danny's coat pocket, ready …
After: Unwrapped in C.J.'s hands on or near the …
Before: Wrapped and concealed in Danny's coat pocket, ready to be presented.
After: Unwrapped in C.J.'s hands on or near the desk; its reveal remains a private joke and is not reused later in the scene.
Visitor Chair in C.J. Cregg's Office

The visitor chair holds Danny while he listens and flirts; its occupation frames the intimacy of the moment and its subsequent vacancy marks the room's transition once he leaves for Leo's entrance.

Before: Occupied by Danny, centrally positioned near the desk.
After: Empty after Danny stands, retrieves his coat, and …
Before: Occupied by Danny, centrally positioned near the desk.
After: Empty after Danny stands, retrieves his coat, and leaves the office.
C.J.'s Press Office Desk

C.J.'s press office desk anchors the beat: she leans against it while reading the list, it holds the unwrapped gift and any stray papers, and it becomes the physical stage where playfulness and policy collide — hands, lists, and the goldfish container share its surface.

Before: Cluttered with briefing packets and a list; available …
After: Still cluttered but now bears the torn wrapping …
Before: Cluttered with briefing packets and a list; available as a lean/reading surface.
After: Still cluttered but now bears the torn wrapping and unwrapped goldfish container; continues as the staging ground for private and professional exchange.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Doorway to C.J. Cregg's Office (West Wing)

Night pools at C.J.'s office doorway: Carol stands in the jamb to announce Leo's arrival, the doorway operates as the hinge between private levity and institutional authority, and orchestrates exits/entrances that change tone and control access to the office's intimate space.

Atmosphere A tonal hinge — intimate and relaxed inside the office, tense and managerial at the …
Function Threshold that stages entrances/exits and signals the shift from personal to professional interaction.
Symbolism Represents the boundary between private human moments and the demands of institutional power.
Access Informal but authoritative — doorway is monitored by staff (Carol) and functions as a semi-restricted …
nighttime quiet emphasizing privacy a narrow sound boundary where conversation tightens at the threshold soft office lighting that contrasts with corridor austerity

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 1
Causal

"The news of Lowell Lydell's hate crime motivates C.J.'s passionate advocacy for hate-crime legislation, which Leo then attempts to temper, creating a direct cause-and-effect chain."

Holiday Briefing Interrupted — Hate-Crime's Arrival
S1E10 · In Excelsis Deo

Key Dialogue

"LEO: Listen, dial down the rhetoric on hate crimes would you?"
"C.J.: They made him say 'Hail Mary's' as they beat him to death. This was a crime of entertainment."
"C.J.: Want me to come cook you something? / LEO: What are you my mother?"