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S2E7 · The Portland Trip
S2E7
· The Portland Trip

Bartlet Presses Leo on Overdue Speech Draft

In the President's cabin on Air Force One, moments after Leo's vulnerable divorce confession, Bartlet pivots briskly to business, demanding the final draft of his Portland morning speech. Leo reveals Toby and Sam are still refining it, with Sam ironically rejecting his own talented draft and taking another pass. This terse exchange exposes the speechwriting team's perfectionist tensions and high stakes, bridging personal staff vulnerabilities to the administration's urgent policy push amid the flight's chaos.

Plot Beats

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Bartlet and Leo discuss the lack of a final draft for the morning's speech, revealing tensions about the speechwriting process.

curiosity to frustration ['Air Force One cabin']

Leo updates Bartlet on progress from Toby and Sam, hinting at dissatisfaction with the speech's quality.

concern to mild irritation

The irony that Sam, the original writer, is unsatisfied with his own work adds a layer of internal conflict.

surprise to resignation

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Sam Seaborn
primary

Dissatisfied urgency fueling creative restart

Sam is invoked by Leo as dissatisfied with his own draft, rejecting it outright and diving into a fresh revision alongside Toby, highlighting his idealistic drive for excellence.

Goals in this moment
  • • Elevate the speech beyond initial adequacy
  • • Align rhetoric with administration's bold vision
Active beliefs
  • • His own writing can always improve
  • • The Portland speech demands revolutionary fire
Character traits
self-critical idealistic perfectionist
Follow Sam Seaborn's journey
Toby Ziegler
primary

Focused determination amid creative frustration

Toby is referenced by Leo as actively collaborating with Sam in the staff area, refining the speech draft under deadline pressure, his pragmatic intensity implied in the ongoing revisions.

Goals in this moment
  • • Forge a rhetorically airtight education speech
  • • Meet the President's imminent delivery deadline
Active beliefs
  • • Compromise strengthens policy messaging
  • • Relentless iteration elevates presidential words
Character traits
dedicated intense pragmatic
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Josiah Bartlet
primary

brisk

talking on the phone about an unknown matter, pivoting to demand the final draft of tomorrow morning's speech, hangs up

Goals in this moment
  • • obtain the final draft of the Portland morning speech
Character traits
protective resolute self-aware principled
Follow Josiah Bartlet's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Final Draft of President's Portland Morning Speech

The final draft serves as the event's narrative fulcrum, its overdue status sparking Bartlet's demand and Leo's explanation; it embodies the speechwriting team's tensions, with Sam's rejection underscoring perfectionism vital to the administration's education policy push, heightening stakes en route to Portland.

Before: Incomplete and under revision by Toby and Sam …
After: Still in progress, with Sam embarking on another …
Before: Incomplete and under revision by Toby and Sam elsewhere on Air Force One
After: Still in progress, with Sam embarking on another draft iteration

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Valhalla Vector - Jet Route 23 Wheeling, West Virginia

The superscription 'VALHALLA VECTOR - JET ROUTE 23 WHEELING, WEST VIRGINIA' overlays the scene, anchoring the terse phone exchange in stratospheric transit over Middle America, amplifying isolation and urgency as policy deadlines loom amid the flight's ceaseless motion.

Atmosphere High-altitude detachment laced with executive impatience
Function Aerial waypoint framing the President's private cabin call
Symbolism Evokes inexorable forward momentum toward Portland's policy battleground
Access Restricted to presidential airspace trajectory
Jet route coordinates flashing overhead Distant ground lights 30,000 feet below

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Key Dialogue

"BARTLET: Okay. Why don't I have a final draft of tomorrow morning's...?"
"LEO: Toby and Sam are working on it."
"BARTLET: What's wrong with it?"
"LEO: Sam doesn't like the writing."
"BARTLET: Sam wrote it."
"LEO: He's taking another swing."