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S2E18 · 17 People
S2E18
· 17 People

Toby's Anguished Probe: Leo Confirms Hoynes Knows the MS Secret

On the White House portico at night, a visibly shattered Toby sits with head in hands, approached by Leo amid distant thunder. Toby cuts straight to the heart of his fury, confirming Vice President Hoynes is among the 16 who know President Bartlet's concealed MS diagnosis. Leo's terse affirmatives expose Hoynes' belief that Bartlet won't run again, crystallizing Toby's betrayal and igniting administration fractures in this pivotal revelation that shatters fragile unity and propels the secret's explosive arc forward.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Toby sits in visible distress on a bench, his head in his hand, as Leo slowly approaches from the Residence, signaling tension and an impending confrontation.

distress to anticipation ['White House Portico at night']

Leo informs Toby that the President is still on the phone with State, momentarily delaying the confrontation, as distant thunder rumbles ominously.

anticipation to suspense

Toby directly asks if Hoynes knows about the President's condition, cutting through the tension with a sharp question.

suspense to confrontation

Leo confirms Hoynes is one of the 16 who know, revealing the extent of the secret's spread and deepening Toby's sense of betrayal.

confrontation to betrayal

Toby presses further, asking if Hoynes believes the President won't run again, underscoring the political implications of the secret.

betrayal to urgency

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Coldly calculating ambition (inferred from beliefs)

Hoynes is invoked by name and confirmed by Leo as one of the 16 aware of Bartlet's MS diagnosis, revealed to believe the President won't seek re-election, crystallizing his opportunistic betrayal without physical presence.

Goals in this moment
  • Position for 2002 presidential ticket using insider knowledge
  • Exploit perceived Bartlet vulnerability for personal gain
Active beliefs
  • Bartlet's MS ensures he won't run again
  • His polling and maneuvers justify preemptive power grab
Character traits
Opportunistic Disloyal
Follow John Hoynes's journey

Visibly shattered anguish laced with seething fury over betrayal

Toby sits despondently on a bench with head in hand, looks up intensely as Leo nears, then unleashes pointed questions confirming Hoynes' knowledge of the MS secret and his disbelief in Bartlet's re-election, driving the confrontation's emotional core.

Goals in this moment
  • Extract brutal truth about Hoynes' inclusion in the secret circle
  • Gauge the depth of disloyalty threatening Bartlet's future
Active beliefs
  • Hoynes' actions stem from insider knowledge of the MS diagnosis
  • The administration's unity crumbles under concealed ambitions
Character traits
Anguished Confrontational Relentlessly probing
Follow Toby Ziegler's journey

mentioned as still on the phone with State in the Residence; subject of Hoynes' belief that he won't run again

Character traits
protective resolute self-aware principled
Follow Josiah Bartlet's journey

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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The Residence

The Residence serves as the referenced origin for Leo's approach and the site of President Bartlet's ongoing secure call with State, underscoring his dutiful isolation amid personal crisis; it heightens tension by contrasting private diplomacy with the portico's raw exposure of internal fractures.

Atmosphere Shadowed, urgent hush of midnight diplomacy clashing with external storm
Function Off-site reference point anchoring presidential activity and Leo's path
Symbolism Sanctuary of concealed truths and leadership burdens
Access Restricted to President and secure communications
Secure phone line in use Dust-moted oak-paneled sanctuary implied

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Key Dialogue

"TOBY: "So Hoynes knows?""
"TOBY: "Hoynes is one of the 16?" LEO: "Yeah.""
"TOBY: "And he thinks the President won't run again?""