Toby Hesitates — Babies Carried Into Andy's Room
Plot Beats
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Toby emerges from Andy's hospital room and enters the nurse's station, checking on his babies.
The nurse asks if Andy is asleep, and Toby confirms.
Toby watches his crying babies through the window, showing his paternal concern.
The nurse offers to bring the babies into Andy's room, but Toby hesitates before accepting.
The nurse smiles and starts to walk away as Toby finally agrees to her offer.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Tender and protective toward his children, outwardly polite but inwardly conflicted — small domestic joy tempered by anxiety and the knowledge of urgent national duties.
Toby emerges from Andy's hospital room, pauses at the nurse's station, studies his newborns at the window, declines the nurse's initial offer, then after a brief, telling hesitation accepts the offer to have the babies brought in.
- • To have a private, grounding moment with his newborn twins.
- • To preserve Andy's rest and avoid disrupting the patient while balancing his own emotional need.
- • Private family moments are precious and must be protected.
- • He believes he must appear composed and not impose, even while craving connection.
Calm, quietly sympathetic and practical — attempting to ease a new parent's anxieties through small, concrete help.
The nurse tends the twins at the station, notices Toby, offers to bring the babies into Andy's room for a private moment, smiles supportively and begins to step away when Toby initially declines, remaining quietly attentive to his needs.
- • To facilitate a brief, private family reunion between Toby and the newborns.
- • To maintain patient care while accommodating family needs with discretion and warmth.
- • Small gestures by staff can materially comfort family members.
- • Parents benefit from private moments with newborns and staff should enable them when possible.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
Andy's hospital room is the private space being proposed for the babies to be brought into; it exists off-stage as the sanctuary Toby has just left and the place where a quieter, protected family moment could occur.
The nurse's station functions as the immediate setting for the interaction: a clinical front desk where newborns are being tended and where a private family offer is made. It acts as a liminal space between public hospital routine and intimate family life.
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Key Dialogue
"NURSE: "Mr. Ziegler? You know, these people went home last night. If you like, I can bring the babies in there and you can have a few moments""
"TOBY: "Oh, no. Thank you. No. That's okay.""
"TOBY: "Okay. Yeah, sure.""