Welty vs. Gandhi — A Father's Anxiety Before the Podium

At the top of Georgetown's staircase Bartlet and Will make last-minute edits to the commencement address, briefly sparring over whether to lead with Eudora Welty or Gandhi. Will praises the speech as a 'home run' but gently punctures Bartlet's public confidence by admitting it won't keep Zoey from going to France. Bartlet answers with a disarming, private wish — 'let's write that one' — then composes himself for the ceremony. The exchange reveals Bartlet's paternal fear beneath the public ritual and sets an emotional undercurrent that will complicate the public event that follows.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Bartlet and Will debate the choice between using a Eudora Welty quote or a Gandhi quote in the commencement speech, reflecting on the speech's theme of creativity.

uncertainty to resolution ['top of a staircase']

Will reassures Bartlet that the speech is strong but acknowledges it won't address Bartlet's personal concern about Zoey leaving for France.

confidence to concern

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Neutral and professional; a functional presence focused on ceremony rather than personal stakes.

Provides the voice-over introduction calling the President and Georgetown's president forward, formally converting the private rehearsal into a public moment and cueing audience attention.

Goals in this moment
  • Announce the procession correctly and clearly
  • Signal the audience to focus on the stage
Active beliefs
  • Ceremonial announcements organize public attention
  • Protocol matters in formal events
Character traits
formal procedural neutral
Follow Ceremonial Announcer …'s journey

Professional calm; focused on logistics rather than sentiment.

An aide approaches, addresses the President formally, places something on him (mic/ceremonial pin) and cues him to proceed, moving the moment from private prep to public action.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure the President is properly prepared and mic'd for the speech
  • Keep the ceremony on schedule and run smooth transitions
Active beliefs
  • Ceremonial protocol must be followed
  • The President needs support from staff to perform publicly
Character traits
businesslike attentive efficient
Follow Aides and …'s journey

Surface composure and professional focus; privately anxious and protective about his daughter — uses humor to deflect and steady himself.

Standing at the top of the staircase, Bartlet huddles over final edits, sparring lightly about quote choice, masking paternal anxiety with wry humor before accepting a cue and descending to deliver the address.

Goals in this moment
  • Finalize and polish the commencement speech
  • Maintain ceremonial composure while managing private worry about Zoey
  • Project presidential steadiness for the public procession
Active beliefs
  • Words and literary choices shape the tone of an address
  • Public duty must continue even when private life threatens disruption
  • A light joke can hide or diffuse real anxiety
Character traits
wry paternal self-aware anxious but composed
Follow Josiah Bartlet's journey

Celebratory and expectant — focused on ritual and honor rather than the President's private anxieties.

The assembled crowd applauds and cheers as Bartlet and the Chancellor descend and walk out, providing the supportive public frame against which Bartlet's private concern is juxtaposed.

Goals in this moment
  • Receive the commencement address
  • Celebrate graduates and honored guests
Active beliefs
  • Ceremonial pageantry reinforces communal values
  • The President is a figure to be applauded at such events
Character traits
supportive reverent enthusiastic
Follow Georgetown Commencement …'s journey

Not an emotional participant — functions as a rhetorical presence influencing tone.

Referenced by Bartlet and Will as the alternative literary voice for the speech; her work is invoked as a tonal choice that would shape the address differently than Gandhi's quote.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide phrasing that can humanize or localize the speech
  • Offer a literary register compatible with Bartlet's persona
Active beliefs
  • American literary sources can better match certain rhetorical frames
  • Quotation choice materially affects audience reception
Character traits
literary resonant American voice
Follow Eudora Welty's journey

Not emotionally present; functions as a rhetorical benchmark for universality and activism.

Referenced as the existing quote option — the Gandhi line is discussed for suitability and cultural tone, creating a contrast with Welty as potential phrasing.

Goals in this moment
  • Offer a concise, universal moral call for graduates
  • Anchor the speech in a familiar, motivational aphorism
Active beliefs
  • Certain quotations carry cross-cultural weight
  • Familiar moral aphorisms can be effective in commencement addresses
Character traits
philosophical universal cross-cultural
Follow Mahatma Gandhi's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Zoey Bartlet's Georgetown Commencement Camera

Zoey's compact camera is pulled out and used to snap a candid picture of her father as he prepares to walk out, creating a private visual memory in the midst of public ritual.

Before: In Zoey's possession in the audience/stair vicinity.
After: Returned to Zoey after the photo is taken; …
Before: In Zoey's possession in the audience/stair vicinity.
After: Returned to Zoey after the photo is taken; contains the new image of her father.
Georgetown Commencement Teleprompter

The TelePrompter sits waiting at the podium as an unused procedural device; it is discussed by the Chancellor and Bartlet as an option but ultimately not employed, emphasizing Bartlet's off-script approach.

Before: Positioned at the podium, ready for use but …
After: Remains unused while Bartlet proceeds without it.
Before: Positioned at the podium, ready for use but not activated.
After: Remains unused while Bartlet proceeds without it.
Bartlet's Commencement Speech Napkins

Bartlet jokes about having parts of the speech on crumpled napkins in his pocket; they function symbolically as his informal, intimate notes and proof of a practiced, human readiness behind the formal speech.

Before: In Bartlet's pocket as informal notes and mnemonic …
After: Still carried by Bartlet in his pocket as …
Before: In Bartlet's pocket as informal notes and mnemonic aids.
After: Still carried by Bartlet in his pocket as he descends to the stage.
Double Doors to Georgetown Commencement Stage

The double doors function as the physical threshold Bartlet and the Chancellor pass through from private stair landing to the public stage, marking the transition from preparation to performance.

Before: Closed as Bartlet and the Chancellor prepare on …
After: Passed through by the procession; remain as the …
Before: Closed as Bartlet and the Chancellor prepare on the staircase landing.
After: Passed through by the procession; remain as the entry/exit to the ceremony space.
Pomp and Circumstance

Pomp and Circumstance swells as the procession descends and exits, providing the ceremonial soundtrack that cloaks Bartlet's private anxieties in public ritual and cadence.

Before: Beginning to play as the procession is cued.
After: Continues as Bartlet and the Chancellor move out …
Before: Beginning to play as the procession is cued.
After: Continues as Bartlet and the Chancellor move out front and the crowd applauds.
Bartlet's Speech Folder

Bartlet holds the speech folder while he and Will make last-minute edits, using it as the primary written script and tangible anchor for his prepared remarks.

Before: In Bartlet's hands at the top of the …
After: Taken with him as he descends to the …
Before: In Bartlet's hands at the top of the staircase containing the speech.
After: Taken with him as he descends to the podium to deliver the address.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Georgetown Building

The Georgetown Building is the broader architectural host for the exchange, containing both the private landing and the public forum; it frames the ceremony's institutional gravity against personal moments.

Atmosphere Formally ceremonial overall, with pockets of backstage intimacy.
Function Venue for the commencement ceremony and the site of the private-to-public transition.
Symbolism Embodies institutional legitimacy and the university's public ritual.
Access Public spaces open to graduates and guests; backstage/landing limited to officials and invited staff.
Ceremony music (Pomp and Circumstance) echoing through the hall Applause and crowd noise below Well-lit front area contrasted with the more secluded landing
Top of the Georgetown Staircase

The top of the Georgetown staircase serves as an intimate preparation space where Bartlet and his aide finalize tone and lines; it is both backstage and a threshold, allowing a last private exchange before public exposure.

Atmosphere Tense and quiet with low-key banter; undercut by the formality heard below.
Function Staging area for last-minute rehearsal and emotional preparation before the procession.
Symbolism A literal and metaphorical threshold between Bartlet's private fatherhood and his public presidency.
Access Limited to the President, his aides, and the Chancellor in this moment.
Dimmer, semi-private landing overlooking the ceremony hall Pomp and Circumstance audible from below Double doors immediately ahead as the exit to public view
Georgetown Ceremony Front Area

The ceremony front area is the public-facing stage where Bartlet will perform; it is where the crowd receives him and where the private tension must be converted into a composed address.

Atmosphere Celebratory, focused, and expectant as the audience applauds and watches the procession.
Function Stage for the public delivery of the commencement address and the display of institutional ritual.
Symbolism Represents the public obligations of office, requiring personal anxieties to be temporarily set aside.
Access Open to attendees but controlled and monitored; the Presidential party leads the procession onto this …
Lively crowd applause and cheering Bright lighting for the stage area Prominent use of ceremonial music and formal seating

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Georgetown University

Georgetown University hosts and orchestrates the commencement ceremony, represented by the Chancellor and institutional protocol; the university frames the event as both academic ritual and a stage for presidential visibility.

Representation Through the Chancellor's presence and the formal program and announcements that structure the procession.
Power Dynamics The university holds hosting authority over the ceremony while accommodating the President's high-profile participation; it …
Impact The event reinforces Georgetown's public profile and its relationship with the White House; it also …
Internal Dynamics Operational focus on ceremony flow and visitor management; potential behind-the-scenes concern about media optics and …
Successfully run a dignified commencement ceremony Showcase institutional prestige by featuring the President Maintain decorum and protect attendees during a high-profile event Ceremonial protocol and event logistics Institutional reputation and the Chancellor's authority Coordination with security and the President's staff

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What led here 7
Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet and Will's debate over the speech's theme continues as they prepare."

Pocketed Anxiety — Final Edits and the Walk to Commencement
S4E22 · Commencement
Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet's decision to change his speech's focus is debated with Will during preparation."

Pearls Before the Podium
S4E22 · Commencement
Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet and Will's debate over the speech's theme continues as they prepare."

A Father's Smile — Zoey's Quiet Photograph
S4E22 · Commencement
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS medium

"The commencement ceremony leads to Bartlet's speech and Zoey's photo."

Reverent Silence — Commencement Opens at Georgetown
S4E22 · Commencement
Temporal weak

"The aide's interruption leads directly to Bartlet's speech logistics."

A Father's Smile — Zoey's Quiet Photograph
S4E22 · Commencement
Temporal weak

"The aide's interruption leads directly to Bartlet's speech logistics."

Pocketed Anxiety — Final Edits and the Walk to Commencement
S4E22 · Commencement
Thematic Parallel medium

"Bartlet's personal gift to Abbey contrasts with his public responsibilities during the commencement speech."

Pearls Before the Podium
S4E22 · Commencement
What this causes 6
Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet and Will's debate over the speech's theme continues as they prepare."

Pocketed Anxiety — Final Edits and the Walk to Commencement
S4E22 · Commencement
Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet and Will's debate over the speech's theme continues as they prepare."

A Father's Smile — Zoey's Quiet Photograph
S4E22 · Commencement
Temporal weak

"The aide's interruption leads directly to Bartlet's speech logistics."

Pocketed Anxiety — Final Edits and the Walk to Commencement
S4E22 · Commencement
Temporal weak

"The aide's interruption leads directly to Bartlet's speech logistics."

A Father's Smile — Zoey's Quiet Photograph
S4E22 · Commencement
Thematic Parallel medium

"Zoey's photo of her father contrasts with her confused feelings for Charlie."

Moonlit Bottle at the Arboretum
S4E22 · Commencement
Thematic Parallel medium

"Zoey's photo of her father contrasts with her confused feelings for Charlie."

Arboretum Kiss — Champagne, Confession, Goodbye
S4E22 · Commencement

Key Dialogue

"BARTLET: What do you think about using the Eudora Welty quote instead of the Gandhi?"
"WILL: Sir, this speech is about creativity and in my judgement, it's a home run. Now, what it isn't is a speech that will convince Zoey not to go to France tomorrow."
"BARTLET: Well, let's write that one."