Doug Presses Toby for Apology and Haiti Reckoning; Toby Abruptly Exits
Plot Beats
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Doug orders a drink and engages in small talk with the bartender, setting a casual yet tense atmosphere in the bar.
Toby arrives, exchanges friendly banter with the bartender, and orders a drink, momentarily lightening the mood.
Doug confronts Toby about the speech and the necessity of an apology, revealing underlying tensions and strategic disagreements.
Toby shuts down Doug's argument about Haiti, emphasizing the sensitivity of military strategy and the inappropriateness of the conversation.
Toby leaves the conversation, and the bartender questions Doug about their relationship, highlighting the strained dynamics between the characters.
Who Was There
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Frustrated determination cracking into weary resignation
Doug sits nursing his martini, initiates confrontation by probing Toby's read on the speech draft, leans in aggressively to advocate apology timing with Haiti analogy, persists through rebuffs, then sighs heavily to bartender's query after Toby's exit, embodying campaign enforcer's mounting desperation.
- • Convince Toby to incorporate apology for damage control
- • Preempt prolonged MS scrutiny by seizing the moment
- • Timely concessions like apologies prevent escalation into crises
- • Haiti's failure proves hesitation invites disaster
Irritated resolve bordering on contemptuous impatience
Toby strides to bar, gifts M&Ms casually, orders Jack Daniels, confirms reading draft then flatly rejects apology demanding full rewrite, shuts down Haiti-military talk with press warning and dismissive gesture, rises abruptly abandoning drink to storm out amid escalating rift.
- • Enforce uncompromising speech overhaul without weak apology
- • Silenc military strategy leaks to protect campaign optics
- • Genuine apologies can't be forced or half-measures
- • White House experience demands vigilance against public blunders
Curiously detached amusement at outsiders' drama
Bartender pours Doug's martini amid light crowd banter, warmly greets Toby taking M&Ms gift, serves Toby's Jack Daniels mid-argument, then probes their friendship post-exit with casual curiosity, threading normalcy through political tension.
- • Serve drinks and facilitate patron comfort
- • Gauge the evident strain between visitors
- • Political 'circus' brings crowds and tempers
- • Strangers in bars often mask deeper conflicts
Objects Involved
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Doug orders and receives the chilled Absolut martini on the rocks early, cradling it as prop during intensifying pitch to Toby; it anchors his seated persistence amid rejection, symbolizing strained casualness in high-stakes campaign proxy war, condensation mirroring cooling alliance.
Toby proffers the Air Force One M&Ms packet as ritual gift upon arrival, handing it to bartender Lois who pockets it gratefully; this fleeting gesture humanizes Toby's gruff entry, contrasting the bar's gritty tension with insider privilege before clash erupts.
Bartender pours and slides Toby's ordered Jack Daniels across bar mid-confrontation; Toby ignores it entirely, rising to exit without sip—its abandonment underscores his abrupt rejection and fury, liquid slosh echoing unresolved volatility in re-election storm.
Location Details
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Haiti erupts as verbal flashpoint when Doug invokes its coup and failed U.S. invasion strategy to hammer apology urgency, pressing Toby on 'setting the table right'; Toby kills the topic fearing exposure, positioning Haiti as haunting precedent amplifying MS scandal's peril in campaign calculus.
Organizations Involved
Institutional presence and influence
Toby weaponizes the White House Press Corps as omnipresent threat, sarcastically urging Doug to speak louder so 'the entire' corps hears military-Haiti talk; this invocation ratchets tension, embodying media's razor scrutiny poised to shred offhand leaks into re-election torpedoes.
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Key Dialogue
"DOUG: "Toby, if he doesn't apologize by Monday, we're going to spend the next 15 months being asked why. Then when he does, it's going to be because he had to. There are moments and when they are missed...""
"DOUG: "Like Haiti...""
"TOBY: "Don't talk about military strategy in a conversation like this.""