Engine-Deck Tension — Picard Re-centers Command
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Riker challenges Data’s dismissal of the dilithium readouts, transforming a technical discussion into a charged exchange that reveals his underlying anxiety—uncertainty about the anomaly mirrors his deeper unease about control and competence.
Picard enters and swiftly confirms the anomaly’s seriousness, steering the conversation toward Starbase Montgomery’s involvement—his authority silences further technical debate, revealing his control over the mission’s true purpose.
Who Was There
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Neutral and focused; delivering timely navigational/communication information without emotional coloring.
Wesley, off-screen via com, reports that the Enterprise is within hailing range of Starbase Montgomery—providing the factual trigger that allows Picard to justify the external analysis and the operational stop.
- • Inform command of the ship's proximity to Starbase Montgomery
- • Enable command decisions that rely on external resources
- • Maintain accurate communications channel status
- • Timely navigation/hailing information is crucial to operational decisions
- • Accurate, crisp reporting supports command effectiveness
- • Providing the fact of range neutralizes speculation about feasibility of external support
Composed and purposeful; deliberately controlling the tempo to convert ambiguity into actionable command leverage.
Picard enters Main Engine Room, listens to technical arguments, and decisively reframes the anomaly as a mission-level issue. He orders a stop at Starbase Montgomery, reduces to impulse power, and privately summons Riker to the Observation Lounge before exiting via turbolift.
- • Ensure the ship's engineering anomaly is independently verified
- • Reassert command authority and control the personnel/operational situation
- • Create a private forum (Observation Lounge) to press a personnel matter with Riker
- • Institutional prudence requires independent verification for potentially risky anomalies
- • Command must manage both technical and personnel issues simultaneously
- • Subtle pressure and timing are effective tools to prompt decisive choices from subordinates
Clinically calm and unemotional; confident in technical remedies without weighing interpersonal or command implications.
Data provides a measured, technical assessment downplaying the readouts' severity and offering in-house corrective procedures like recrystallizing dilithium or reprogramming system variables, treating the issue as solvable engineering work.
- • Offer accurate, mechanistic solutions to the readout anomaly
- • Maintain system integrity using available shipboard resources
- • Reduce unnecessary operational disruption or external dependencies
- • Most anomalies are resolvable by precise technical intervention
- • Logical, stepwise remedies are superior to precautionary external escalations
- • Minimizing external involvement preserves ship autonomy
Concerned and slightly anxious; his outward assertiveness masks worry about the consequences of a missed problem and about his own judgment under scrutiny.
Riker challenges Data's dismissal, pressing that the discrepancy might indicate a larger problem; he questions the unplanned stop and transfer directives, showing professional vigilance mixed with defensiveness and anxiety about responsibility.
- • Ensure the anomaly is not dismissed prematurely
- • Protect the ship and crew from latent technical failure
- • Clarify the operational implications of the unexpected Starbase stop
- • Technical anomalies can indicate deeper systemic issues
- • As first officer, he must advocate for caution even if it irritates others
- • Command decisions can impose personal career costs that must be considered
Mildly anxious but controlled; he balances professional caution with an easygoing attempt to defuse personal tension.
Geordi inspects the blender/readouts and voices practical concern, aligning with Riker that a problem may exist while downplaying ego and reassuring Data; he acts as pragmatic mediator between alarm and confidence.
- • Accurately diagnose the readout anomaly
- • Support technically sound, pragmatic decisions that protect the ship
- • Avoid unnecessary personal or professional friction among colleagues
- • Technical anomalies warrant careful, not panicked, investigation
- • Crew cohesion matters when diagnosing problems
- • There is value in getting an external, independent reading if doubt persists
Objects Involved
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The dilithium crystal containment and readout apparatus provide the anomaly at the heart of the dispute; its flickering indicators and diagnostic glyphs catalyze technical debate and justify Picard's decision to request an external reading at Starbase Montgomery.
The engineering turbolift functions as Picard's physical exit and symbolic removal from the technical debate; he departs via the car after issuing orders and a private summons, turning movement into a staging device for shifting the scene's focus.
Location Details
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The Main Engine Room is the operational crucible where the dilithium readouts are observed, arguments unfold, and command presence asserts itself; its humming machinery and diagnostic consoles concentrate technical and interpersonal tension into a single workspace.
Starbase Montgomery functions as the external technical authority whose independent analysis Picard invokes to legitimize the stop and to shift the debate from internal fixes to outside verification.
The Observation Lounge is invoked as a private, isolating set-piece where Picard intends to press Riker privately; it functions as the immediate next stage for the personnel conversation Picard is engineering by converting operational action into interpersonal leverage.
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Key Dialogue
"DATA: I would consider them insignificant."
"RIKER: Sorry. But what if it's more than a mere discrepancy?"
"PICARD: Meet me in the Observation Lounge when you're done here."