A Moment of Mourning in Motion
Plot Beats
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Picard strides briskly through the corridor while Wesley rushes up and calls, 'Captain Picard.' Picard stops and waits for Wesley, converting the hurry into a focused exchange.
Picard asks, 'What is it?' and Wesley, hesitant, requests permission to attend Dr. Graves's ceremony, explaining he never had a chance to meet him.
Picard paraphrases Wesley's wish and warmly approves—'I think it's a fine idea. Come along, Wes.' Wesley nods, securing his inclusion in the ceremony.
Who Was There
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Hesitant hopefulness mixed with regret
Physically hurrying to catch Picard, then hesitating mid-request. His aborted sentence and nodding response reveal youthful earnestness tempered by unprocessed grief over never meeting his scientific idol.
- • Secure permission to attend Graves' ceremony
- • Acknowledge personal connection to Graves' work
- • Formal participation will provide closure
- • Picard recognizes the value of mentorship beyond protocol
Professionally composed with underlying compassion
Initially brisk but pauses attentively when Wesley approaches. Shifts from command stance ('What is it?') to paternal warmth ('Come along, Wes'), lowering hierarchical barriers through body language and tone.
- • Honor Graves' legacy through structured ceremony
- • Provide Wesley with guidance during emotional moment
- • Rituals of remembrance strengthen crew cohesion
- • Junior officers learn through participation in significant events
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Key Dialogue
"WESLEY: I heard about the ceremony you're having for Doctor Graves, and... well sir --"
"PICARD: You wish to attend."
"PICARD: I think it's a fine idea. Come along, Wes."