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S2E15 · Pen Pals
S2E15
· Pen Pals

Ten-Minute Extraction — The Quiet Breach

In the transporter room Riker engineers a deliberate, low-profile violation of protocol: he instructs O'Brien to feign ignorance while Data is covertly beamed down with a strict ten‑minute limit. Data accepts and vows to beam out immediately if anyone other than Sarjenka appears, making his mission a literal countdown and moral crucible. A bridge call interrupts Riker’s direct oversight, forcing him to leave and leaving O'Brien complicit as the only on‑site cover. This scene functions as a turning point and setup — the formal breach of the Prime Directive is consummated under a veneer of procedural calm, isolating Data to make an ethically fraught choice alone.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Riker orders O'Brien to feign ignorance and withdraw from the operation, establishing a clandestine mission as Data prepares to violate the Prime Directive.

formal to clandestine ['Transporter Room']

Riker imposes a strict ten-minute window for Data’s beam-down, enforcing a fragile boundary between rescue and overreach, while Data pledges immediate extraction if anyone but Sarjenka appears.

tense to resolute ['Transporter Room']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Miles O'Brien
Chief Petty Officer, Transporter Chief
 primary

Nervous but dutiful—masking anxiety with practiced casualness to maintain the operation's cover.

Stands behind the console and performs willful nonchalance: feigns sleep, verbally confirms he'll cover the transport, promises a flawless beam-out, and remains the on-site enabler after Riker is called away.

Goals in this moment
  • • Provide a believable procedural alibi for the covert transport
  • • Ensure technical success of the beam and the safe return of Data if needed
Active beliefs
  • • Following a superior's discreet order is part of duty
  • • Operational competence and silence protect crew and mission
  • • A prompt, smooth beam-out minimizes complications
Character traits
professional compliant nervous but steady loyal
Follow Miles O'Brien's journey
Data
Second Officer
 primary

Composed and resolute—externally unemotional but internally committed to honoring both the instruction and the humanitarian imperative.

Calmly accepts Riker's constraints, mounts the transporter pad, receives the ten-minute limit, and dematerializes with the explicit instruction to abort and signal for immediate beam-out if he encounters anyone other than Sarjenka.

Goals in this moment
  • • Locate Sarjenka and assess the planetary crisis on-site
  • • Protect Sarjenka and withdraw immediately if the situation departs from the narrow mandate
Active beliefs
  • • Obedience to a clear operational rule (ten-minute limit) helps contain moral risk
  • • Humanitarian contact is possible without full institutional interference if carefully controlled
Character traits
disciplined resolute procedural quietly empathetic
Follow Data's journey
William Riker
Commander
 primary

Urgent and conflicted—projects command composure while privately acknowledging the ethical compromise he's authorizing.

Commands the covert operation: instructs O'Brien to pretend ignorance, lays down a strict ten-minute extraction rule for Data, reacts to the bridge call and exits hurriedly—abruptly removing his physical oversight.

Goals in this moment
  • • Enable Data to contact Sarjenka without attracting formal scrutiny
  • • Limit institutional exposure by imposing a strict ten-minute window
  • • Preserve plausible deniability through O'Brien's cover
Active beliefs
  • • The immediate humanitarian need may justify a limited procedural breach
  • • Containment and time limits reduce the risk of scandal or precedent
  • • Operational discretion is preferable to bureaucratic debate in crisis
Character traits
decisive pragmatic protective of subordinates torn between duty and compassion
Follow William Riker's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Transporter Room Entrance Doorway

The transporter room's entrance doorway functions as the framed threshold that converts private procedure into potential public exposure; it stands as the formal seam through which rematerializations would become visible, increasing the stakes of the covert transport and anchoring the risk of discovery when Riker leaves.

Before: Open and idle at the transporter's mouth, marking …
After: Remains open and unchanged physically, but now charged …
Before: Open and idle at the transporter's mouth, marking the boundary between corridor and pad.
After: Remains open and unchanged physically, but now charged as an evidentiary threshold should anyone enter or if a rematerialization occurs.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

The main bridge's role is indirect but decisive: a single call from the bridge interrupts and removes Riker's physical oversight, representing institutional command and forcing the covert operation to proceed with diminished authority on-site.

Atmosphere Businesslike and authoritative at the moment of communication; its normal bustle translates into a terse, …
Function Command center that reasserts institutional reach by summoning Riker, thereby altering the power balance in …
Symbolism Represents Starfleet's institutional presence and the procedural constraints that the covert mission is attempting to …
Access Restricted to senior officers and operational crew; communications are privileged.
Calm, clipped coms that cut across the transporter room's secrecy Presence implied by the summon rather than physical entry Audible speaker voice with formal command tone
Enterprise Transporter Room (Transporter Platform)

The transporter pad is the operational center of the breach: Data stands on it to dematerialize, O'Brien mans nearby controls under the cover of feigned sleep, and the pad becomes the literal site of the moral countdown represented by the ten-minute constraint.

Atmosphere Taut and furtive—low hum of machinery, controlled voices, an undercurrent of anxiety.
Function Stage for clandestine extraction and moral decision-making; technical mechanism enabling the Prime Directive violation.
Symbolism Embodies the momentary breach between institutional procedures and personal compassion—a literal threshold into forbidden territory.
Access Normally limited to authorized personnel; in this moment access is intentionally restricted by the participants' …
Low electric hum of transporter coils Clinical lighting focused on the hexagonal pad Sparse personnel presence to maintain cover Console interfaces within reach of O'Brien

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 3
NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Data’s transport to Drema Four is the direct outcome of his request to Picard and the subsequent authorization from Riker. His appearance on the planet is the physical manifestation of the moral breach — setting the stage for his ultimate act: saving Sarjenka."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Data’s transport to Drema Four is the direct outcome of his request to Picard and the subsequent authorization from Riker. His appearance on the planet is the physical manifestation of the moral breach — setting the stage for his ultimate act: saving Sarjenka."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS

"Data’s transport to Drema Four is the direct outcome of his request to Picard and the subsequent authorization from Riker. His appearance on the planet is the physical manifestation of the moral breach — setting the stage for his ultimate act: saving Sarjenka."

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Key Dialogue

"RIKER: O'Brien, take a nap. You didn't see this, you're not involved."
"RIKER: Ten minutes, Data, that's it, and if you meet anybody but Sarjenka --"
"DATA: I will signal for immediate beam out."