Fabula
S5E8 · Unification Part II

Pardek reveals Proconsul meeting and warns of surveillance

In a dim, austere Romulan café, Spock and Picard—disguised as locals—await Pardek, a Romulan senator and Spock’s confidant, while navigating the fragile optimism of the underground reunification movement. The scene opens with D’Tan, a young Romulan boy, delivering a coded message (a flower) to Spock, signaling Pardek’s imminent arrival. The boy’s idealism and curiosity about Vulcan contrast sharply with the bleak, oppressive atmosphere of the street, where even a simple gesture like gifting a flower carries political risk. Spock and Picard engage in a tense exchange about the viability of the reunification movement, with Picard voicing skepticism and Spock defending his Vulcan logic-driven optimism. Their dialogue reveals Spock’s personal investment in the cause, framed as a moral choice to overcome centuries of enmity, while Picard’s cynicism reflects Starfleet’s institutional distrust of the Romulans. Pardek arrives and interrupts their discussion, scolding D’Tan for bringing a forbidden book about the Vulcan separation—a text that symbolizes the movement’s ideological foundation. Pardek then guides Spock and Picard away from the café, shifting the conversation to a more private setting on the street. Here, he reveals the critical development: the Romulan Proconsul, a high-ranking official, has agreed to meet with Spock, an unprecedented diplomatic opportunity. Pardek’s cautious optimism about the younger generation’s commitment to unity is tempered by a warning about heightened surveillance, underscoring the political peril of Spock’s mission. The scene ends with Spock and Picard reacting to this news, setting up the high-stakes meeting with the Proconsul while foreshadowing the fragility of the reform movement and the looming threat of betrayal. The event serves as a turning point in Act Two, bridging Spock’s idealistic hopes with the harsh realities of Romulan politics. Pardek’s revelation about the Proconsul meeting is a major plot advancement, while his warning about surveillance introduces tension and raises the stakes for Spock’s diplomatic efforts. Thematically, the scene explores the tension between hope and pragmatism, as well as the generational divide within Romulan society. The presence of D’Tan and the forbidden book also highlights the movement’s ideological roots, tying Spock’s personal mission to the broader historical context of Vulcan-Romulan separation.

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Conflict between Vulcan logic and personal hope, tempered by a quiet determination to honor his father’s legacy and bridge the divide between Vulcan and Romulus. Surface calm masks deep emotional investment in the reunification cause.

Spock, disguised as a Romulan, stands in the dimly lit café, his posture rigid yet his expression betraying a mix of hope and conflict. He engages in hushed dialogue with Picard, defending the reunification movement with Vulcan logic while internally grappling with the emotional weight of his mission. When D'Tan arrives with the forbidden book, Spock examines it closely, his fingers tracing the worn pages as he acknowledges the boy's idealism. His reaction to Pardek's revelation about the Proconsul meeting is one of measured optimism, though his emotional state is complex—rooted in both the moral imperative of his cause and the personal stakes of his father's legacy.

Goals in this moment
  • To convince Picard of the sincerity and potential of the Romulan reunification movement
  • To protect D'Tan and the underground movement from Romulan surveillance while advancing their cause
Active beliefs
  • That logic and empathy can overcome centuries of enmity between Vulcan and Romulus
  • That the younger generation, like D'Tan, holds the key to lasting change
Character traits
Diplomatic yet emotionally conflicted Idealistic but pragmatic Defensive of Vulcan principles Attentive to subtle cues (e.g., the flower's symbolism) Respectful of youthful idealism (e.g., D'Tan)
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Cautiously optimistic, balancing the hope for change with the ever-present threat of Romulan surveillance and political repression. His surface confidence masks a deeper awareness of the fragility of their mission.

Pardek arrives at the café with an air of authority, his demeanor a mix of caution and optimism. He scolds D'Tan for bringing the forbidden book but does so with a paternal tone, acknowledging the boy’s idealism. His dialogue with Spock and Picard is measured, revealing his belief in the younger generation’s role in shaping Romulan society. He warns of heightened surveillance, underscoring the political peril of their meeting, but also shares the critical news that the Proconsul has agreed to meet with Spock. Pardek’s actions and words reflect a man torn between his reformist ideals and the realities of Romulan politics.

Goals in this moment
  • To facilitate the meeting between Spock and the Proconsul, despite the risks
  • To protect the underground movement from Romulan authorities while advancing their cause
Active beliefs
  • That the younger generation, like D'Tan, will drive the reunification movement forward
  • That the Proconsul’s agreement to meet with Spock is a genuine step toward peace
Character traits
Cautious yet optimistic Authoritative but paternal Strategic and diplomatic Attuned to the risks of surveillance Committed to the reunification cause
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Soup Woman
primary

Excited and hopeful, driven by a desire to learn about Vulcan and contribute to the reunification movement. His idealism is untempered by the political realities that weigh on the adults around him.

D'Tan bursts into the café, breathless and excited, carrying a single flower and a forbidden book. He delivers the flower as a coded signal, his eyes bright with curiosity and idealism. When he presents the book to Spock, he does so with pride, eager to share his knowledge of Vulcan history. His interaction with Spock is filled with youthful enthusiasm, and he leaves with a smile after Spock promises to tell more stories about Vulcan. D'Tan’s presence embodies the hope and passion of the younger generation, a stark contrast to the bleakness of Romulan society.

Goals in this moment
  • To impress Spock with his knowledge of Vulcan history
  • To play a role in the reunification movement, however small
Active beliefs
  • That Vulcan and Romulus can be reunified through shared knowledge and ideals
  • That the younger generation will succeed where older Romulans have failed
Character traits
Idealistic and curious Bold yet naive Eager to learn about Vulcan Unafraid to challenge Romulan norms Inspired by Spock’s presence
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Cautiously optimistic, balancing institutional distrust with a willingness to entertain the possibility of change. Surface skepticism masks a deeper curiosity about the Romulans’ motivations and the potential for peace.

Picard, also disguised as a Romulan, stands beside Spock in the café, his skepticism evident in his posture and tone. He listens to Spock’s arguments with a critical ear, challenging the viability of the reunification movement and questioning the Romulans’ sudden embrace of peace. His dialogue with Spock reveals a deep-seated distrust of the Romulans, rooted in Starfleet’s institutional caution. However, he engages thoughtfully, acknowledging the potential for change even as he voices his doubts. When Pardek reveals the Proconsul’s agreement to meet with Spock, Picard’s reaction is one of cautious curiosity, his skepticism tempered by the possibility of a diplomatic breakthrough.

Goals in this moment
  • To assess the genuine intentions of the Romulan reunification movement
  • To ensure Spock’s mission does not compromise Starfleet’s security or diplomatic protocols
Active beliefs
  • That the Romulans’ sudden peace initiative may be a deception or a trap
  • That lasting change requires more than idealism—it demands concrete actions and trust
Character traits
Skeptical but open-minded Diplomatic yet cautious Analytical and probing Respectful of Spock’s perspective Attuned to the political risks of the situation
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Supporting 3
D'Tan
secondary

Focused and cautious, with a quiet determination to support the movement. His demeanor is one of controlled urgency, mindful of the dangers of being observed.

Romulan#1 briefly appears in the café, delivering the coded message—a single flower—to Spock. His interaction is swift and discreet, his demeanor purposeful. He uses the phrase ‘Jolan True’ to confirm the signal, then moves on without drawing attention. His role is that of a silent but vital cog in the reunification movement, ensuring that messages are delivered without arousing suspicion.

Goals in this moment
  • To deliver the coded message to Spock without detection
  • To uphold the integrity of the reunification movement’s signals
Active beliefs
  • That the movement’s success depends on secrecy and precision
  • That even small actions, like delivering a flower, contribute to the larger cause
Character traits
Discreet and purposeful Loyal to the reunification cause Attuned to surveillance risks Efficient in his actions
Follow D'Tan's journey

Distrustful and alert, her demeanor reflecting the paranoia that permeates Romulan society. She is a symbol of the oppressive atmosphere that the reunification movement must navigate.

The Old Grim Woman delivers soup to Spock and Picard, her sharp eyes lingering on the flower in the glass of water. She says nothing but her gaze is piercing, filled with suspicion. Her silent scrutiny underscores the ever-present threat of surveillance in Romulan society, a reminder that even the smallest gestures can be dangerous. She leaves without a word, her presence a stark contrast to the idealism of D'Tan and the hope of the underground movement.

Goals in this moment
  • To identify and report suspicious behavior to Romulan authorities
  • To maintain the status quo by discouraging subversive activity
Active beliefs
  • That outsiders and unusual behavior pose a threat to Romulan security
  • That it is her duty to report anything that seems out of place
Character traits
Suspicious and wary Loyal to Romulan authority Attuned to unusual behavior Silent but observant
Follow Romulan Reunification …'s journey

Hopeful yet tense, fueled by the belief that change is possible but aware of the constant threat of surveillance and repression. Their collective spirit is embodied in D'Tan’s idealism and Pardek’s cautious optimism.

The Romulan Underground is represented indirectly through D'Tan’s actions and Pardek’s dialogue. Their presence is felt in the forbidden book D'Tan brings, the coded signals they use, and the idealism they inspire in the younger generation. While not physically present, their influence is palpable, driving the scene’s tension and hope. Their collective belief in reunification contrasts sharply with the oppressive Romulan leadership, embodying the movement’s passion and resilience.

Goals in this moment
  • To advance the reunification movement through education and secret meetings
  • To protect their members from Romulan authorities while spreading their ideals
Active beliefs
  • That Vulcan and Romulus can be reunified through shared knowledge and cultural exchange
  • That the younger generation will lead the way to a new Romulan identity
Character traits
Passionate and idealistic Resilient in the face of oppression Driven by a shared vision of unity Willing to take risks for their cause
Follow Romulan Underground …'s journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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D'Tan's Glass of Water

The glass of water serves as a simple yet symbolic container for the flower, transforming an ordinary object into a coded signal. When D'Tan places the flower in the glass, it becomes a focal point for Spock and Picard, signaling the arrival of Pardek and the safety of their meeting. The glass is unremarkable in itself, but its role in this context elevates it to a symbol of the movement’s secrecy and the delicate balance between hope and danger. The act of placing the flower in the water is a quiet, almost ritualistic gesture, reinforcing the movement’s reliance on subtle, everyday objects to convey meaning.

Before: Empty and unremarkable, sitting on the café table …
After: Contains the single flower, now a coded signal …
Before: Empty and unremarkable, sitting on the café table among other mundane objects.
After: Contains the single flower, now a coded signal and symbol of hope, though its new significance also makes it a potential point of suspicion.
D'Tan's Illegal Book on the Vulcan Separation

The forbidden book about the Vulcan separation is a tangible representation of the reunification movement’s ideological foundation. Brought by D'Tan, it is old and worn, its pages carrying the history of the split between Vulcan and Romulus. The book is a source of pride for D'Tan, who presents it to Spock with excitement, and a point of concern for Pardek, who scolds the boy for bringing it into the open. The book’s presence underscores the movement’s commitment to understanding their shared past and the risks they take to preserve and share this knowledge. It also serves as a reminder of the historical and cultural divides that Spock and the movement seek to overcome.

Before: Hidden and protected, likely kept in a safe …
After: Temporarily in Spock’s possession, examined with reverence before …
Before: Hidden and protected, likely kept in a safe or private space by D'Tan or other members of the underground.
After: Temporarily in Spock’s possession, examined with reverence before being returned to D'Tan or hidden again, its presence a fleeting but powerful symbol of the movement’s ideals.
D'Tan's Reunification Flower

The single flower delivered by D'Tan is a coded message signaling Pardek’s imminent arrival and the safety of the meeting. Placed in a glass of water by D'Tan, it becomes a symbol of hope and unity in the otherwise bleak Romulan café. The flower’s presence is subtle yet charged with meaning, serving as a visual cue for Spock and Picard while also embodying the fragile nature of the reunification movement. Its delivery by a young boy underscores the movement’s reliance on idealism and the next generation to drive change. The flower is also a point of suspicion for the Old Grim Woman, highlighting the ever-present risk of detection in Romulan society.

Before: Carried by D'Tan, fresh and intact, ready to …
After: Placed in a glass of water on the …
Before: Carried by D'Tan, fresh and intact, ready to be used as a coded signal.
After: Placed in a glass of water on the café table, where it remains as a symbol of hope and unity, though its presence draws the suspicion of the Old Grim Woman.
Soup Woman's Bowls of Soup

The bowls of soup delivered by the Old Grim Woman serve a dual purpose: they provide a distraction, allowing Spock and Picard to blend in as ordinary Romulan patrons, and they create a tense, almost theatrical moment as the woman’s suspicious gaze lingers on the flower. The soup is a mundane object, but its delivery becomes a point of tension, highlighting the constant threat of surveillance. The act of eating the soup is a performative gesture, reinforcing the characters’ disguises and the precariousness of their situation. The steam rising from the bowls adds to the atmosphere of the café, making it feel even more oppressive and claustrophobic.

Before: Prepared in the café’s kitchen, ready to be …
After: Consumed by Spock and Picard, the bowls now …
Before: Prepared in the café’s kitchen, ready to be served to customers as part of the establishment’s routine.
After: Consumed by Spock and Picard, the bowls now empty, their purpose fulfilled as both a prop and a moment of tension in the scene.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Dark Austere Café (Romulan Street Café)

The street outside the café serves as a transitional space where Pardek reveals the critical news about the Proconsul’s agreement to meet with Spock. This location shift is significant, as it allows the characters to move away from the prying eyes of the café’s patrons and engage in a more private conversation. The street’s bleakness and the presence of pedestrians add to the sense of urgency and the ever-present risk of being observed. The conversation here is a turning point, setting the stage for the high-stakes meeting with the Proconsul and foreshadowing the fragility of the reform movement.

Atmosphere Bleak and exposed, with a sense of urgency and the constant threat of surveillance. The …
Function Transitional space for private discussions and the revelation of critical information. It allows the characters …
Symbolism Represents the fragile nature of the reunification movement’s progress and the constant need to balance …
Access Open to the public but monitored by Romulan authorities. Pedestrians move quickly, aware of the …
The same bleak, colorless architecture as the rest of the street Pedestrians hurrying past, their faces averted to avoid drawing attention The dim light of the café spilling onto the street, a reminder of the fragile safety it provided The presence of Pardek, Spock, and Picard as they move away from the café, their conversation a mix of hope and caution
Romulan Street (Bleak Neighborhood)

The Romulan street serves as the bleak, oppressive backdrop for this scene, embodying the struggles of everyday life under Romulan rule. It is colorless and poor, with pedestrians hurrying past without eye contact, reflecting the paranoia and isolation that characterize Romulan society. The street is a place of survival, where even small gestures like D'Tan’s delivery of the flower carry significant risk. Its atmosphere is one of tension and suspicion, underscored by the presence of patrolling soldiers and the ever-watchful eyes of civilians like the Old Grim Woman. The street’s poverty and bleakness contrast sharply with the idealism of the reunification movement, highlighting the challenges Spock and his allies face in their mission.

Atmosphere Bleak, oppressive, and paranoid, with a palpable sense of surveillance and struggle. The street feels …
Function Setting for the initial coded message delivery and the transition to the café, where the …
Symbolism Represents the harsh realities of Romulan life and the contrast between the movement’s idealism and …
Access Open to the public but heavily monitored by Romulan authorities. Civilians move cautiously, aware of …
Colorless, bleak architecture with minimal decoration Pedestrians hurrying past without making eye contact A line of people waiting outside a general store, reflecting the scarcity of resources The dimly lit café as a rare point of gathering, though even here, tension is high

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Romulan Senate

The Romulan Senate is represented through Pardek’s dialogue and the mention of its adjournment. The Senate’s influence looms over the scene, as its decisions and surveillance policies shape the environment in which the reunification movement operates. Pardek, as a senator, is both a part of this institution and a reformist who seeks to challenge its traditional isolationism. The Senate’s power is evident in the way it adjourns sessions, allowing Pardek to meet with Spock, and in the way it monitors the activities of the underground movement. The organization’s presence is felt in the tension and caution that characterize the scene, as well as in the revelation that the Proconsul has agreed to meet with Spock.

Representation Through Pardek’s role as a senator and his dialogue about the Senate’s adjournment and the …
Power Dynamics Exercising authority over individuals and institutions, including the underground movement. The Senate’s power is both …
Impact The Senate’s actions and policies create an environment of tension and paranoia, forcing the reunification …
Internal Dynamics The Senate is divided between traditionalists who oppose reunification and reformists like Pardek who seek …
To maintain control over Romulan society and suppress dissent, particularly from the reunification movement To navigate the political landscape in a way that balances traditional isolationism with the potential for change (e.g., the Proconsul’s meeting with Spock) Through institutional protocols, such as the adjournment of Senate sessions and the authorization of meetings with foreign dignitaries By exerting surveillance and repression to monitor and control the activities of the underground movement By leveraging the authority of high-ranking officials, such as the Proconsul, to shape diplomatic engagements
Romulan Government

Romulan Leadership is represented through the mention of heightened surveillance and the oppressive atmosphere of the street and café. The leadership’s influence is felt in the way it monitors the activities of the underground movement, the suspicion of civilians like the Old Grim Woman, and the caution exhibited by Pardek and Spock. The organization’s power is evident in its ability to create an environment of fear and paranoia, where even small gestures like the delivery of a flower can be dangerous. The leadership’s presence is a constant reminder of the risks faced by the reunification movement and the fragility of their mission.

Representation Through the oppressive atmosphere of the street and café, the suspicious gaze of civilians like …
Power Dynamics Exercising authority over individuals and institutions, creating an environment of fear and repression. The leadership’s …
Impact The leadership’s actions create a climate of suspicion and danger, forcing the reunification movement to …
Internal Dynamics The leadership is united in its opposition to the reunification movement but may be divided …
To maintain control over Romulan society and suppress dissent, particularly from the reunification movement To monitor and repress activities that challenge the traditional isolationism of Romulan politics Through institutional surveillance and repression, creating an environment of fear and paranoia By leveraging the loyalty of civilians, such as the Old Grim Woman, to report suspicious behavior By exerting control over public spaces, such as the street and café, to monitor the activities of the underground movement
Romulan Reunification Movement

The Romulan Underground is represented indirectly through the actions of D'Tan, Pardek, and the coded signals they use. Their presence is felt in the forbidden book D'Tan brings, the flower as a coded message, and the idealism they inspire in the younger generation. The organization’s influence is palpable, driving the scene’s tension and hope. While not physically present as a collective, their beliefs and actions shape the dialogue and decisions of the characters, particularly Spock and Pardek. The underground’s commitment to reunification contrasts sharply with the oppressive Romulan leadership, embodying the movement’s passion and resilience in the face of repression.

Representation Through the actions of individual members (D'Tan, Pardek) and the symbolic objects they use (the …
Power Dynamics Operating under constraint, as the movement must navigate Romulan surveillance and repression. Their power lies …
Impact The movement’s actions challenge the Romulan leadership’s control and offer a vision of a united …
Internal Dynamics The organization is united by a shared vision of reunification but must navigate internal tensions, …
To advance the reunification movement through education, secret meetings, and coded communication To protect their members from Romulan authorities while spreading their ideals Through the use of symbolic objects (e.g., the flower, the forbidden book) to convey messages and inspire hope By leveraging the idealism of the younger generation to drive the movement forward By maintaining a network of discreet members who operate under the radar of Romulan authorities

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

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Character Continuity

"D'Tan delivering a flower to Spock and Picard (beat_b10369038c8c0a47) is followed by D'Tan presenting Spock with an old book (beat_960f5ec66525db7f)."

D'Tan delivers reunification signal to Spock
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Character Continuity

"D'Tan delivering a flower to Spock and Picard (beat_b10369038c8c0a47) is followed by D'Tan presenting Spock with an old book (beat_960f5ec66525db7f)."

Spock and Picard debate Romulan reunification
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What this causes 9
Causal

"Pardek reveals that the Proconsul has agreed to meet with Spock (beat_a66c3cd4c49a437f), leading directly to the meeting (beat_50471970e936729a)."

Sela and Neral’s Silent Conspiracy
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Causal

"Pardek reveals that the Proconsul has agreed to meet with Spock (beat_a66c3cd4c49a437f), leading directly to the meeting (beat_50471970e936729a)."

Neral’s Deceptive Reunification Pledge
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Causal

"Pardek reveals that the Proconsul has agreed to meet with Spock (beat_a66c3cd4c49a437f), leading directly to the meeting (beat_50471970e936729a)."

Neral’s Recall Interrupts Spock’s Reunification Hope
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Character Continuity

"D'Tan delivering a flower to Spock and Picard (beat_b10369038c8c0a47) is followed by D'Tan presenting Spock with an old book (beat_960f5ec66525db7f)."

D'Tan delivers reunification signal to Spock
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Character Continuity

"D'Tan delivering a flower to Spock and Picard (beat_b10369038c8c0a47) is followed by D'Tan presenting Spock with an old book (beat_960f5ec66525db7f)."

Spock and Picard debate Romulan reunification
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Character Continuity medium

"D'Tan's initial coded signal to Spock and Picard (beat_b10369038c8c0a47) is a preamble to later meeting Spock and inquiring about Neral's stance (beat_65a979edd210ec88), maintaining focus on Romulan reunification efforts."

Spock’s Interruption by Pardek’s Summons
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Character Continuity medium

"D'Tan's initial coded signal to Spock and Picard (beat_b10369038c8c0a47) is a preamble to later meeting Spock and inquiring about Neral's stance (beat_65a979edd210ec88), maintaining focus on Romulan reunification efforts."

D’Tan’s toys test Spock’s idealism
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Foreshadowing medium

"Pardek setting up a meeting with Neral (beat_a66c3cd4c49a437f) leads directly to the the excitement and joy at Spock's report of Neral's endorsement of reunification (beat_746d6c63cf354164), but Spock tempers their enthusiasm with cautious skepticism, observing that the Proconsul's actions are illogical."

Spock defends reunification despite Picard’s warnings
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Foreshadowing medium

"Pardek setting up a meeting with Neral (beat_a66c3cd4c49a437f) leads directly to the the excitement and joy at Spock's report of Neral's endorsement of reunification (beat_746d6c63cf354164), but Spock tempers their enthusiasm with cautious skepticism, observing that the Proconsul's actions are illogical."

Spock defies Picard over reunification
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Key Dialogue

"PARDEK: "So, what do you think of your enemy, Captain Picard?" PICARD: "These people are no one's enemy, Senator.""
"PARDEK: "Many of my colleagues fear what they have to say. But I have learned to listen carefully. Children like D'Tan are our future. Old men like me will not be able to hold on to ancient prejudice and hostility. These young people won't allow it. Now that they've met their first real Vulcan, it has only inspired them more. I'm sure that is evident to you, Spock..." SPOCK: "I did not anticipate such a passionate response to my arrival.""
"PARDEK: "We will know soon. The Proconsul has agreed to meet with you.""