Deadline Revealed — Orders to Prepare and Parley

Data's simple report — "approximately fifteen thousand" colonists — transforms a legal dispute into an urgent humanitarian crisis. Riker's three‑day deadline and Worf's grim shuttle math (four weeks to evacuate) expose an impossible logistical gap. Faced with annihilation, Picard issues parallel, pragmatic directives: Data must begin preparing the settlers for evacuation while Worf reopens contact with the Sheliak to buy more time. This moment functions as a turning point: strategy pivots from persuasion to contingency, setting up confrontation with the colonists' entrenched leadership and the race against time.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Riker and Picard clash with the cold math—transporters are useless, and shuttles would take weeks, leaving them desperate for time.

dread to urgency

Picard orders Data to prepare the colonists for evacuation while demanding Worf contact the unyielding Sheliak, setting two desperate plans in motion.

urgency to resolve

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Calm, resolute — clinical factuality with no rhetorical embellishment, but aware of the moral implications of his data.

Data reports the colony population succinctly over ship comms, acknowledges Picard's evacuation order, and functions as the factual pivot that forces command to change course.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide accurate, verifiable information to command.
  • Follow Picard's orders to prepare the colonists for evacuation.
Active beliefs
  • Accurate data enables sound decision-making.
  • Obedience to Starfleet command and duty to protect lives justify direct action.
Character traits
precise dispassionate obedient
Follow Data's journey
Colonists
primary

Vulnerable and anxious — uncertain about leadership and the prospect of abandonment or forced departure.

The colonists are the silent referent of the entire exchange: their number is reported, their fate becomes the operational constraint, and their presence at the landing site creates moral urgency.

Goals in this moment
  • Survive the Sheliak deadline, either by staying or by being evacuated.
  • Receive clear guidance about safety and the colony's future.
Active beliefs
  • Their lives matter and warrant Federation protection.
  • Local leadership and external aid will determine survival outcomes.
Character traits
vulnerable diverse dependent
Follow Colonists's journey
Haritath
primary

Apprehensive and worried — personal fear for friends and family, searching for reassurance from Federation officers.

Haritath waits at the shuttle landing site with Kentor while Data finishes communications, anxiously representing the colonists' presence and vulnerability as command debates evacuation feasibility.

Goals in this moment
  • Hear clear instructions and assurance from Data and Starfleet.
  • Protect and shepherd community members toward safety if evacuation is ordered.
Active beliefs
  • Federation officers can provide guidance and aid.
  • The colony's survival depends on external help and timely decisions.
Character traits
anxious observant community-minded
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Kentor
primary

Apprehensive but composed — anxious about the threat yet ready to help organize if needed.

Kentor stands with Haritath at the landing site, waiting for Data's communications and likely weighing the implications of an evacuation order for the community he influences.

Goals in this moment
  • Assess the colony's options and readiness for possible evacuation.
  • Provide calm leadership to influence other colonists toward survival.
Active beliefs
  • Community cohesion is essential in crisis.
  • Practical decisions must be made quickly to avoid catastrophe.
Character traits
pragmatic steady influential
Follow Kentor's journey

Urgent and pragmatic — a steady surface urgency that prioritizes human life over diplomatic face-saving.

Picard receives the population report, immediately recalibrates strategy from legal negotiation to humanitarian contingency and issues parallel orders to prepare the colonists and contact the Sheliak.

Goals in this moment
  • Buy time to prevent the colony's annihilation.
  • Coordinate Enterprise resources to facilitate evacuation while preserving legal leverage.
Active beliefs
  • Lives are paramount and demand immediate protective action.
  • Starfleet duty requires both diplomacy and decisive operational orders.
Character traits
decisive moral-pragmatist commanding
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Grimly pragmatic — acknowledging bleak arithmetic without dramatics, focused on facts and limits.

Worf rapidly computes evacuation duration on his console, reports that shuttles would require four weeks plus, and cautions that contacting the Sheliak will take time due to distance.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide accurate evacuation timelines to inform command decisions.
  • Reestablish contact with the Sheliak to seek more time or leeway.
Active beliefs
  • Hard numbers drive feasible plans; emotional courage won't change logistics.
  • Timely communication with the Sheliak is necessary to alter the countdown.
Character traits
practical unemotional tactically-minded
Follow Worf's journey

Concerned and focused — pressing the practical implications of the data to force rapid command decisions.

Riker delivers the hard temporal constraint — three days without transporters — translating Data's statistic into an operational impossibility and raising alarm on the bridge.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure command understands the logistical timeline realistically.
  • Protect the colonists by prompting immediate contingency measures.
Active beliefs
  • Operational timelines must drive tactical decisions.
  • Failure to state constraints candidly endangers lives.
Character traits
clear-headed urgent communicative
Follow William Riker's journey

Alarmed and mobilized — anxiety about scale paired with professional focus on implementing orders.

The bridge crew react with alarm to Data's population figure, process diagnostic readouts, and obey orders as bridge tension escalates from procedural diplomacy to emergency operations.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide accurate sensor and logistical support for evacuation planning.
  • Execute command orders efficiently to maximize survival chances.
Active beliefs
  • Collective bridge action is required to manage mass-evacuation logistics.
  • Immediate, coordinated measures can mitigate worst outcomes if implemented swiftly.
Character traits
alert disciplined responsive
Follow USS Enterprise's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Geordi La Forge's Engineering Workstation

A diagnostic/console resource (represented on the bridge) is used by Worf to compute evacuation timelines — the numerical engine that translates Data's population figure into the four‑week shuttle projection.

Before: Active on the bridge with sensor and transport …
After: Left with calculated evacuation permutations displayed and used …
Before: Active on the bridge with sensor and transport computations engaged.
After: Left with calculated evacuation permutations displayed and used as the basis for Picard's operational orders.
Data's Evacuation Shuttle

The Enterprise shuttlecraft are referenced as the only available physical means to move colonists without transporters; Worf calculates their aggregate capacity and the timeline needed if shuttles were the sole method.

Before: Docked and available aboard the Enterprise, ready to …
After: Identified as primary evacuation assets and implicitly queued …
Before: Docked and available aboard the Enterprise, ready to be loaded but insufficient in number to evacuate fifteen thousand quickly.
After: Identified as primary evacuation assets and implicitly queued for maximum utilization, though still insufficient to meet the three-day window.
Enterprise Bridge Hailing / Priority Voice Channel

The shipboard com line carries Data's population report to the bridge and relays Picard's evacuation order; it is the immediate communications lifeline connecting the planet's landing site and Enterprise command in real time.

Before: Operational and open for two-way communications between the …
After: Temporarily closed by Picard after Data acknowledges orders, …
Before: Operational and open for two-way communications between the planet landing site and the bridge.
After: Temporarily closed by Picard after Data acknowledges orders, remaining available for further coordination.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

The Enterprise main bridge is the scene's nerve center: diplomatic data, tactical calculations, and moral decisions collide here as officers receive Data's census and convert it into urgent orders and contingency plans.

Atmosphere Tension-filled and urgent, edged with professional alarm as the crew digests the scale of the …
Function Command center for assessment, ordering evacuation, and reestablishing diplomatic contact.
Symbolism Embodies institutional responsibility — where legalism meets human lives and command must choose action over …
Access Restricted to senior staff and bridge crew during active operations.
Cold console light and processor hum. Clustered officers around tactical displays and the forward viewscreen. Concise, clipped verbal exchanges and the open com line.
USS Enterprise Orbit Around Tau Cygna V (Tau Cygna Five)

The Enterprise's orbit around Tau Cygna Five frames the crisis: the ship holds a tactical perch while the viewscreen displays the Sheliak ultimatum that imposes the deadline forcing evacuation calculations.

Atmosphere Oppressively formal and watchful — the quiet of space amplifies the weight of the ultimatum …
Function Observational platform and operational scaffold from which orders, communications, and shuttle deployments originate.
Symbolism The orbit represents the Federation's protective yet constrained reach — close enough to observe and …
Access Operational zone managed by the Enterprise command; external actors must be contacted via diplomatic channels.
Panoramic forward viewscreen dominated by treaty text. The silent void beyond underscoring the isolation of the colonists. Diagnostic readouts and shuttle manifests queued for deployment.

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Key Dialogue

"DATA: "Approximately fifteen thousand.""
"RIKER: "We've only got three days. Without working transporters, we couldn't have them out in time.""
"PICARD: "Then we need more time. Mister Data, prepare the colonists for an evacuation.""