Defenses Offline — Enemy Fire Incoming
Plot Beats
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Riker orders shields raised, but Worf reports system failure.
Geordi confirms manual override attempts fail as shields remain offline.
Worf detects incoming enemy fire while systems remain compromised.
Who Was There
Characters present in this moment
Alarmed and concerned; professional composure strained by the immediacy of the threat and the failure of defensive systems.
Standing watch over tactical/sensor readouts, Worf reports that shields are nonresponsive and then announces incoming energy weapon fire, functioning as the bridge's immediate threat sensor and the voice that quantifies danger.
- • Inform command of tactical status and imminent threats
- • Prompt immediate defensive or evasive measures to protect the ship
- • Threats must be confronted directly and reported without delay
- • Shipboard defensive systems are the first line of survival and must be relied upon
Externally authoritative and controlled, but registering concern as his order fails to produce the expected protective effect; forced into urgent problem-reframing.
From the command arc Riker issues the terse order 'Shields up' attempting to assert control; he receives immediately negative technical reports and must absorb the tactical blow while recalibrating strategy under time pressure.
- • Restore the ship's defensive posture to protect the crew
- • Maintain command authority and quickly gather accurate status reports
- • Standard protocols (shields up) should secure the ship
- • Rapid, decisive orders will stabilize the situation
Frustrated and anxious; urgency mixed with professional determination as he wrestles with a failing override that should have been tractable.
At an engineering console Geordi works frantically to engage a manual override, reports the override is jammed, and concedes that shields are unavailable — his technical troubleshooting collides with an intractable systems failure.
- • Re-establish shielding through manual systems if possible
- • Diagnose the cause of the jam to enable alternate protective measures
- • Technical intervention can solve most system failures
- • If manual systems fail, the ship becomes immediately vulnerable
Objects Involved
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The Enterprise's defensive shield matrix is the intended physical barrier invoked by Riker's order; here it is referenced as the primary means of protection but is observed to be unresponsive, narratively converting the shield from safety to absence and signaling systemic breach.
Location Details
Places and their significance in this event
The main bridge (represented here by the aft Science One/main bridge locus) functions as the nerve center where tactical decisions and system diagnostics collide; it is the stage for command, technical troubleshooting, and the immediate reception of hostile action, concentrating responsibility and vulnerability.
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Key Dialogue
"RIKER: "Shields up.""
"WORF: "Shields are not responding.""
"GEORDI: "Manual overide is jammed. It's not gonna work this time... we don't have shields, Captain.""
"WORF: "Captain, they've fired energy weapons at us...""