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S2E6 · Star Trek: The Next Generation - Loud as a Whisper

Fragile Truce on Solais Five

As the Enterprise enters orbit around Solais Five, Worf detects immediate violations of the cease-fire, casting doubt on the sustainability of peace. The faction leaders challenge Picard's jurisdiction, demanding Riva's presence in a tense standoff that tests Starfleet's neutrality. Riva's dramatic intervention—leveraging his reputation and the Chorus' performative authority—temporarily halts hostilities. Riker's pragmatic skepticism about the truce's longevity contrasts with Picard's measured diplomacy, while Data's technical support enables the fragile communication. The scene culminates in the selection of a neutral hilltop meeting site, underscoring how quickly the mediation mission teeters between hope and renewed violence.

Plot Beats

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Riker voices skepticism about the durability of the cease-fire and requests a topographical overlay and Picard's assistance to select and stage a safe meeting site, injecting practical doubt and immediate logistical needs into the fragile truce.

relief/hope to skepticism/practical concern ['Main Bridge']

The command team relocates to Science One, examines the planetary display, and decides to beam down to a hilltop—solidifying a concrete plan for the mediation and setting the next physical stage for Riva's mission.

planning resolve ['Science One']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Confident bordering on theatrical

Riva confidently takes charge of the situation, using his reputation and the Chorus' performance to command attention and temporarily halt hostilities.

Goals in this moment
  • Assert his authority as mediator
  • Temporarily halt the violence
Active beliefs
  • His reputation alone can influence the factions
  • Performance is key to diplomatic success
Character traits
Confident Charismatic Slightly arrogant Persuasive
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Professionally neutral with underlying tension

The Chorus supports Riva's communication efforts, translating his silent expressions into vocal diplomacy during the tense confrontation.

Goals in this moment
  • Accurately convey Riva's messages
  • Maintain ceremonial discipline
Active beliefs
  • Their role is essential to Riva's mediation
  • Precision prevents misunderstandings
Character traits
Synchronized Expressive Disciplined
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Hostile with underlying fear of betrayal

The First Leader defiantly challenges Picard's jurisdiction and insists on Riva's presence, demonstrating deep distrust of Federation intervention.

Goals in this moment
  • Assert sovereignty over the conflict
  • Ensure Riva mediates directly
Active beliefs
  • Federation involvement threatens their autonomy
  • Only Riva can be trusted to mediate
Character traits
Defiant Distrustful Demanding
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Volatile with wounded pride

The Second Leader vehemently insists on Riva's direct involvement, accusing others of breaking agreements while demonstrating factional defiance.

Goals in this moment
  • Hold Riva to his promises
  • Resist perceived Federation interference
Active beliefs
  • The Federation cannot be trusted
  • Violence remains a valid negotiation tactic
Character traits
Aggressive Accusatory Defiant
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Focused professionalism

Wesley Crusher precisely executes navigational commands, bringing the Enterprise into standard orbit around the conflict-torn planet.

Goals in this moment
  • Maintain exact orbital position
  • Respond instantly to command orders
Active beliefs
  • Technical precision enables success
  • Bridge protocol ensures safety
Character traits
Precise Competent Disciplined
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Intense focus masking underlying concern

Captain Picard asserts Federation authority over the Solari conflict, attempting to mediate while protecting his crew. He defers to Riva's expertise but remains firmly in command of the Enterprise.

Goals in this moment
  • Maintain the Enterprise's neutrality and safety
  • Facilitate Riva's mediation despite hostilities
Active beliefs
  • Starfleet's role is to mediate, not impose
  • Riva's reputation can sway the factions
Character traits
Diplomatic Authoritative Protective Strategic
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Neutral focus on technical tasks

Data provides critical technical support, ensuring communication with the factions and later analyzing the planetary topography for the meeting site.

Goals in this moment
  • Maintain effective communication systems
  • Provide accurate topographical data
Active beliefs
  • Technology enables diplomacy
  • Precision facilitates conflict resolution
Character traits
Efficient Precise Analytical
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Professionally focused with warrior's tension

Worf detects the cease-fire violations and monitors the unstable communications with the faction leaders, maintaining constant security vigilance.

Goals in this moment
  • Detect and report all security threats
  • Maintain defensive readiness
Active beliefs
  • Trust must be verified by constant vigilance
  • Conflict often lies beneath surface agreements
Character traits
Vigilant Alert Direct
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Cautiously skeptical with underlying concern

Riker exhibits pragmatic skepticism about the cease-fire's longevity, questioning the Solari factions' commitment to peace while managing tactical operations.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure the Enterprise's tactical readiness
  • Assess the viability of peace negotiations
Active beliefs
  • The Solari factions are inherently volatile
  • Diplomacy requires a strong tactical foundation
Character traits
Pragmatic Skeptical Tactical Protective
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Professionally calm with underlying concern

Troi facilitates Riva's transition to the bridge once summoned, supporting his confidence while remaining professionally observant of the tense situation.

Goals in this moment
  • Support Riva's mediation efforts
  • Assess the emotional state of all parties
Active beliefs
  • Emotional understanding facilitates diplomacy
  • Riva's unique approach can succeed
Character traits
Supportive Observant Adaptable
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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USS Enterprise — Main Bridge Viewscreen

The viewscreen displays the distorted images of the faction leaders and the planet's surface, serving as the critical visual interface between the Enterprise and the warring factions during strained communications.

Before: Displaying orbital approach to Solais Five
After: Showing static-filled faces of faction leaders during negotiations
Before: Displaying orbital approach to Solais Five
After: Showing static-filled faces of faction leaders during negotiations
Laser Activity on Solais Five's Surface

The laser activity on Solais Five's surface serves as concrete evidence of cease-fire violations, triggering the diplomatic crisis and forcing Picard and Riva's intervention.

Before: Undetected during warp approach
After: Temporarily ceased after Riva's intervention
Before: Undetected during warp approach
After: Temporarily ceased after Riva's intervention
Solais Five Topographical Overlay

The topographical overlay becomes crucial for selecting a neutral meeting site, representing both the physical landscape and the fragile political terrain Riva must navigate.

Before: Not yet called up for analysis
After: Actively displayed with proposed meeting site identified
Before: Not yet called up for analysis
After: Actively displayed with proposed meeting site identified

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Bridge

Science One becomes the technical hub where planetary analysis occurs, facilitating the selection of a neutral meeting site crucial for the negotiation's success.

Atmosphere Technical focus with underlying tension
Function Analytical center for mission planning
Symbolism Represents the scientific approach to conflict resolution
Access Officers conducting specific analyses
Holographic displays of planetary topography Specialized scanning equipment at work
Brekkian Guest Quarters

The Brekkian Guest Quarters serve as Riva's private space before he's urgently summoned to the bridge, marking the transition from personal interaction to crisis management.

Atmosphere Intimate quickly shifting to urgent
Function Transition point from relaxation to crisis response
Symbolism Represents the personal stakes behind professional negotiations
Access Limited to Riva and authorized crew
Comfortable furnishings contrasting with sudden urgency Private space suddenly invaded by bridge communication
Neutral Hilltop

The neutral hilltop emerges as the chosen meeting site, representing the precarious hope for peace amidst a landscape of violence.

Atmosphere Fragile but hopeful
Function Proposed neutral ground for negotiations
Symbolism Represents the possibility of rising above conflict
Access Yet to be secured
Elevated position offering strategic visibility Geographically separated from faction strongholds
Solais Five

Solais Five looms as the unstable planet where cease-fire violations erupt, its surface both the source of conflict and the proposed site for peace negotiations.

Atmosphere Volatile with underlying tension
Function Primary conflict zone and proposed negotiation site
Symbolism Embodies fragile peace amidst historical violence
Access Currently too dangerous for direct contact
Laser activity visible from orbit Brown, war-torn surface indicating prolonged conflict

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Key Dialogue

"RIKER: 'So much for the cease-fire.'"
"PICARD: 'If you continue to violate the rules by breaking the cease-fire, I will abort this mission.'"
"RIVA: 'Brothers! Your bravery as fighters is known, now you must demonstrate your courage in a new way—cease hostilities—allow us to meet.'"