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A Volunteer’s Sacrifice; Picard Commits Cover

When the battered Enterprise‑C emerges through the rift, young Lieutenant Castillo steps forward and offers to lead the crippled ship back into its doomed past — invoking Captain Garrett’s wishes and accepting almost certain death. Riker flags the ship’s crippling manpower and tactical limitations while Data reports growing rift instability and Tasha warns that Klingon command now knows their coordinates. Picard, moved and grave, orders the Enterprise‑D to hold position and provide covering support, sealing the painful commitment with a formal salute between captains. This is a decisive turning point: a moral, tactical choice that sets impending sacrifice into motion and tightens the race against time.

Plot Beats

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Castillo declares his readiness to lead the Enterprise-C back through the temporal rift, despite the overwhelming odds.

determination to resolve ['Observation Lounge']

Riker highlights the severe limitations Castillo will face, emphasizing the absence of key personnel and resources.

concern to pragmatism

Castillo asserts his belief that returning to their original time is what Captain Garrett would have wanted, reinforcing his resolve.

doubt to conviction

Castillo reaffirms his intention to return through the rift unless directly ordered otherwise, displaying unwavering commitment.

resolve to determination

Picard, visibly impressed, asks Castillo how soon the Enterprise-C can be ready, signaling his support for the mission.

admiration to resolve

Picard orders the Enterprise-D to maintain position to provide cover for the Enterprise-C's return.

resolve to solidarity

Castillo and Picard exchange a formal, resolute salute, sealing the commitment to the perilous mission.

respect to solemnity

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Worried and respectful — anxious about tactical exposure but quietly admiring of Castillo's bravery and duty.

Voices tactical urgency by asserting Klingon command likely received their coordinates; watches Castillo with visible concern and then follows him out to stand by during the departure.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure the Enterprise‑D does not remain unnecessarily exposed to Klingon attack
  • Protect Castillo and his crew as much as possible within her remit
  • Act on immediate threats by informing command and preparing to support the mission
Active beliefs
  • Klingon command likely knows their coordinates and will act on it
  • Remaining in the area raises unacceptable risk to the Enterprise‑D
  • Her duty includes both honest warning and personal protection of junior officers
Character traits
protective direct concerned loyal
Follow Tasha Yar's journey

Calmly resolute — accepts near-certain sacrifice with a soldier's clarity and filial loyalty to his captain's memory.

Volunteers boldly to lead his crippled ship back into the rift, invokes Captain Garrett's wishes as justification, declares intention to return unless forbidden, renders a crisp salute and departs with Tasha.

Goals in this moment
  • Return the Enterprise‑C to its rightful place in history
  • Honor Captain Garrett's presumed wishes and the ship's legacy
  • Protect the broader Federation by completing the sacrificial mission
Active beliefs
  • Captain Garrett would want the ship returned to its proper time
  • Personal and crew sacrifice now can prevent greater future catastrophe
  • He and his remaining crew are capable of accomplishing the task despite limitations
Character traits
dutiful courageous idealistic resolute
Follow Castillo's journey

Grave and admiring — externally composed, internally carrying the weight of a painful, consequential choice that accepts necessary sacrifice.

Stands as the moral and operational fulcrum: listens to counsel, receives Data's sensor report, weighs Riker's cautions, then decisively orders the Enterprise‑D to hold and provide cover before returning a formal salute to Castillo.

Goals in this moment
  • Protect the Enterprise‑D and its crew while enabling the larger mission to restore the correct timeline
  • Make a command decision that balances Starfleet duty with moral responsibility
  • Provide tangible cover and resources to the Enterprise‑C to maximize the chance of success
Active beliefs
  • Restoring the Enterprise‑C to its proper time is likely necessary to prevent a wider catastrophe
  • Captain Garrett would have wanted his ship to return; honoring that legacy matters
  • Sometimes command requires painful, sacrificial choices for a greater good
Character traits
measured decisiveness moral stewardship paternal gravitas strategic clarity
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Objectively concerned — communicates facts without affect, but the implications imply serious operational risk.

Relays critical sensor data over com: reports additional instability in the time rift and notes absence of other Klingon vessels on current sensors, providing factual inputs that shape command's risk calculus.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide accurate, up‑to‑the‑moment sensor information to command
  • Monitor rift behavior to inform tactical and temporal decisions
  • Support bridge officers' decision-making with objective data
Active beliefs
  • Sensor data is the primary basis for tactical assessment
  • Rift instability is a measurable, escalating risk likely tied to recent Klingon engagement
  • Absence of Klingon contacts now does not guarantee safety, given possible transmissions
Character traits
analytical precise detached reliable
Follow Data's journey

Concerned and pragmatic — his surface reasoning masks an emotional worry for crew welfare and the moral cost of sending men to likely death.

Interjects with a procedural, operational assessment: warns Picard and Castillo about limited manpower, no tactical support, and reduced engineering — framing the volunteer act as strategically fraught.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure command understands the severe tactical limitations of the Enterprise‑C
  • Protect lives by preventing unnecessarily risky orders
  • Provide Picard with clear operational options to inform a responsible decision
Active beliefs
  • A ship should not be sent into battle without its captain if avoidable
  • Operational realities (manpower, tactical, engineering) must shape moral choices
  • Honoring duty should not ignore practicalities that determine survival
Character traits
pragmatic protective operationally focused cautious
Follow William Riker's journey

Location Details

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Observation Lounge (USS Enterprise-D)

The Observation Lounge functions as the steel‑edged war room where senior officers convene for the decisive moral and tactical exchange. Its panoramic port frames indifferent stars while conversation tightens into operational brevity; the room concentrates authority, witness, and ceremonial salutation.

Atmosphere Tense, reverent, and compressed — quiet commands punctuated by warning beeps and the low mechanical …
Function Meeting place and command forum for senior staff to assess risk, make a binding decision, …
Symbolism Embodies institutional weight and moral isolation — the glassed horizon suggests the vast consequences of …
Access Effectively restricted to senior officers and mission‑critical personnel during this crisis; not a public space …
Broad observation port showing empty space and the rift beyond Low mechanical hum with intermittent console clicks and warning beeps A long conference table and concentrated lamps that create pools of light A ceremonial stillness at the moment of salute

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Key Dialogue

"CASTILLO: I'm prepared to lead the Enterprise back myself, Captain Picard."
"DATA'S COM VOICE: Commander Data to Captain Picard. PICARD: Go ahead. DATA'S COM VOICE: Sir, sensors are showing additional instability in the time rift. Possibly the result of the battle with the Klingons."
"PICARD: We will maintain position to provide cover."