Narrative Web
S3E13
· Deja Q

All‑Hands Tractor‑Beam Gambit and Q's Fall

Picard authorizes a desperate, full‑power effort to nudge a ferrous rogue moon despite Geordi's technical bleakness: the Enterprise strains engines and tractor emitters beyond safe limits while Worf vectors nearby ships. As systems near thermal failure and the crew braces for automatic shutdown, a rising, untraceable chorus fills Engineering — then Q, suddenly powerless and human, materializes. The arrival is a brutal turning point: the salvage gambit is underway and a new, morally fraught complication has just crashed onto the deck.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Geordi warns of the slim chance to shift the moon's trajectory, pushing systems beyond limits while Riker chooses action over inaction.

determination to urgency ['Engineering console']

Picard orders full effort despite risks, mobilizing nearby ships while Worf coordinates.

command to mobilization

The Enterprise strains against the moon's mass, systems overheating as Geordi reports imminent failure.

effort to desperation ['Main Viewer']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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N/A—mechanical and unambiguous; its warnings create pressure and constrain human choice.

An automated engineering/comms voice reports hard system limits: tractor emitter thermal overload risk and impulse engines passing safety, issuing terse warnings that structure staff must heed immediately.

Goals in this moment
  • Alert crew to system thresholds to prevent hardware failure
  • Provide precise status updates to inform command decisions
Active beliefs
  • System telemetry must be reported objectively regardless of command decisions
  • Physical systems will respond to limits and require shutdown if thresholds are exceeded
Character traits
procedural unsentimental urgent
Follow Geordi's Com …'s journey

Resolute with underlying gravity—accepting the burden of a dangerous order while remaining responsive to new data.

Picard hears the risk assessment, weighs moral responsibility, authorizes the dangerous full‑power attempt, and later orders reduction when alarms demand—anchoring the decision in duty and measured authority.

Goals in this moment
  • Authorize the best tactical option available to avert planetary catastrophe
  • Protect the ship and crew by rescinding orders when systems approach failure
Active beliefs
  • Command responsibility includes accepting risk to save others
  • Technical warnings must be listened to and can override previous orders when necessary
Character traits
commanding morally weighty decisive
Follow Jean-Luc Picard's journey

Clinical curiosity with an undercurrent of urgency—focused on measurement and identification rather than panic.

Data supplies precise delta‑v and mass calculations, reports the maneuver's negligible effect, attempts to identify the rising sound, and provides objective technical feedback under stress.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide accurate calculations to inform command decisions
  • Identify the anomalous sound to determine its threat level
Active beliefs
  • Decisions should be informed by precise data
  • Unknown phenomena must be analyzed to mitigate risk
Character traits
analytical detached clarity observant
Follow Data's journey

Alert and controlled—focused on orders and sensor readouts, puzzled but not panicked by the anomaly.

Worf acknowledges and carries out Riker's order to signal nearby ships, monitors sensors for the anomalous noise, and reports that the sound does not register on instruments, maintaining tactical composure.

Goals in this moment
  • Execute orders to rally external support
  • Provide accurate sensor reporting to command
Active beliefs
  • Obedience to command is paramount in crisis
  • Sensors should reveal threats; an unregistered anomaly is concerning
Character traits
disciplined alert procedural
Follow Worf's journey

Determined and impatient—willing to accept high risk to save lives, frustrated by technical pessimism.

Riker pushes the operational argument for attempting the slim chance, issues orders to coordinate external ships, and reacts vocally to the unknown sound and mounting alarms, pressing command toward action.

Goals in this moment
  • Maximize the chance of saving the endangered population by pursuing the risky maneuver
  • Bring allied ships into a coordinated relief effort quickly
Active beliefs
  • Some chance is better than none when lives are at stake
  • Command must move decisively to leverage every available resource
Character traits
decisive tactically bold emotionally driven
Follow William Riker's journey

Stressed and resigned—practical, delivering bleak but necessary facts under pressure while hoping for a solution.

Geordi mans an engineering console, calculates delta‑v requirements, warns that the tractor emitter and impulse engines are beyond thermal limits, and provides the technical baseline that frames the gamble.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent irreversible hardware damage by warning command of system limits
  • Support the best-possible engineering gambit to save the planet if ordered
Active beliefs
  • Engineering constraints are real and must guide decisions
  • There is a narrow, risky mechanical solution worth attempting if commanded
Character traits
technical precision pragmatic urgency anxious candor
Follow Geordi La …'s journey
Q
primary

Confused and exposed—stripped of omnipotence, abruptly dependent and human in a hostile environment.

Q suddenly appears, naked and suspended, then collapses to the deck; his arrival is startling and disorienting, immediately transforming the technical crisis into a personal and ethical complication for the crew.

Goals in this moment
  • Seek immediate refuge and assistance from the ship's crew
  • Establish some rapport or leverage despite newfound vulnerability
Active beliefs
  • He is used to intervening in human affairs and expects engagement from the crew
  • Even powerless, his presence will demand attention and complicate command choices
Character traits
vulnerable disoriented provocative by history
Follow Q's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Red Alert Klaxon

The Red Alert Klaxon activates at the moment Q appears, turning a technical emergency into an immediate, shipwide alarm; its sound heightens urgency and signals an operational shift from calculation to crisis response.

Before: Dormant; red alert not yet engaged while the …
After: Active and filling Engineering with an insistent alarm, …
Before: Dormant; red alert not yet engaged while the tractor/engine gambit is in progress.
After: Active and filling Engineering with an insistent alarm, redirecting crew focus and prompting emergency protocols.
Enterprise Tractor Beam Emitter (Bridge/Engineering Projector)

A specific bridge/engineering tractor-beam emitter module bears the brunt of diverted power; its LEDs flicker and diagnostics warn the crew that continued use will burn out the emitter, making it the single-point failure for the entire salvage gambit.

Before: Operating beyond recommended thermal limits, cooling stressed, showing …
After: Still active but flagged as critically overheated and …
Before: Operating beyond recommended thermal limits, cooling stressed, showing overload telemetry and imminent failure warnings.
After: Still active but flagged as critically overheated and likely to fail if power isn't reduced; functionally jeopardized by continued strain and alarms.
Enterprise Tractor Beam System

The Enterprise Tractor Beam System projects a tether to the ferrous moon and is the primary means attempting to alter its orbit; crew route warp and impulse power into it, pushing its geometry and hold strength to extreme operational stress.

Before: Engaged and actively holding the small moon; drawing …
After: Still engaged but under critical thermal and electrical …
Before: Engaged and actively holding the small moon; drawing supplemental power from warp/impulse to attempt orbital adjustment.
After: Still engaged but under critical thermal and electrical strain, with alarms indicating the risk of burnout and imminent forced shutdown pending command action.
USS Enterprise‑C Impulse Engines

The USS Enterprise impulse engines are pushed above safety thresholds to supply additional thrust and power for the tractor-beam maneuver; their output flares visibly and contributes to the ship's thermal and safety alarms.

Before: Exceeding recommended impulse output by a large margin; …
After: Reported as passing safety limits and seconds from …
Before: Exceeding recommended impulse output by a large margin; engines visibly flaring as they feed extra power to the tractor system.
After: Reported as passing safety limits and seconds from automatic shutdown, requiring immediate reduction or risk of forced engine cutout.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Engineering

Main Engineering is the operational heart of the gambit: consoles glow, the matter/antimatter blender hums, engineers cluster at stations and monitor failing readouts. It hosts the moral and mechanical pressure where human decisions translate into stress on ship systems.

Atmosphere Chaotically focused—alarms, urgent commands, and tense concentration; fear and professional calm braided together.
Function Operational nerve center and action stage where the salvage attempt is executed and where Q's …
Symbolism Embodies the intersection of human fallibility and technological limits; a place where abstract consequences become …
Access Primarily restricted to engineering personnel and senior officers during the crisis; general crew present but …
Warm metallic tang in the air from reactor output Flashing LCARS panels and overheating indicator LEDs A rising, untraceable chorus that seems to fill the bay Matter/antimatter blender audible hum
Main Viewer

The Main Viewer projects the external image of the small moon and command communications; Picard and Riker use it to judge the maneuver's effect and to broadcast status to other ships, making it the visual locus of the gamble.

Atmosphere Cold, clinical light from the viewer contrasts with the warm chaos of Engineering; it emphasizes …
Function Observational display and communications interface: it shows the moon’s immobility and relays Picard's messages to …
Symbolism Represents both the ethical horizon (lives at risk on the moon) and the public accountability …
Access Open to bridge senior staff and relevant officers; controlled for official communications.
High-resolution image of a tumbling ferrous moon Tactical overlays and telemetry floating across the display

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 3
Causal

"Q's sudden appearance and claim of being stripped of powers directly leads to Picard's confrontation and Q's confinement."

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Causal

"Q's sudden appearance and claim of being stripped of powers directly leads to Picard's confrontation and Q's confinement."

Q's Fall: A Mortal Plea and Picard's Command
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Causal

"Q's sudden appearance and claim of being stripped of powers directly leads to Picard's confrontation and Q's confinement."

Q Stripped of Power and Confined
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Themes This Exemplifies

Thematic resonance and meaning

Part of Larger Arcs

Key Dialogue

"GEORDI: We'd need to apply a delta-vee of at least four kilometers per second. Even with warp power to the tractor beam, it would mean exceeding recommended impulse engine output by at least forty-seven percent. It'd be like an ant pushing a tricycle... a slim chance at best..."
"RIKER: (to Picard) Given a choice between slim and none, I'll take slim any day..."
"PICARD: Make it so."