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S3E7
· The Enemy

Sickbay Crisis — Patahk Fails to Respond; Crusher Calls Picard

In Sickbay, medical technicians collect DNA from crew while Dr. Beverly Crusher monitors the gravely wounded Romulan, Patahk. Conventional treatments have no effect; Crusher orders all drugs stopped and urgently contacts Captain Picard. Her clinical decision — born of professional honesty and moral urgency — turns a medical triage into a command crisis, escalating medical reality into diplomatic leverage and forcing the chain of command to confront life-or-death politics.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Medical staff scramble to gather DNA samples while Crusher assesses the Romulan's failing condition, revealing desperation in the hunt for a compatible donor.

urgency to frustration ['Sickbay medical station']

Crusher abandons ineffective treatments and urgently contacts Picard, signaling a critical turn in Patahk's deteriorating state.

frustration to determination

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Implied concern and readiness to weigh medical urgency against wider diplomatic consequences; measured responsibility under pressure.

Captain Picard is the addressee of Crusher's urgent comm; while not physically present in Sickbay, he is positioned as the decision-maker the doctor demands be informed, representing command authority and the next stage of response.

Goals in this moment
  • Receive accurate medical information to make informed command decisions.
  • Balance imperative to save life with the need to avoid unintended diplomatic escalation.
  • Protect crew and ship while preserving Federation diplomatic posture.
Active beliefs
  • Command must be informed of medical realities that carry political consequences.
  • Careful, measured responses are necessary to prevent escalation to conflict.
  • Medical expertise should guide, but final decisions may require command-level judgment.
Character traits
authoritative strategic diplomatically minded responsible
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Urgent and determined; professionally calm but morally compelled — a clinician pushed to force leadership's attention to preserve life and truth.

Dr. Beverly Crusher is actively monitoring the Romulan's life signs, judges ongoing medications ineffective, issues an immediate order to stop all drugs, and keys her combadge to contact Captain Picard, escalating the medical situation into a command communication.

Goals in this moment
  • Stop ineffective or harmful treatments for the Romulan patient.
  • Ensure the captain and command are informed so appropriate command-level decisions can be made.
  • Protect the patient's chances by forcing clarity and action.
  • Preserve medical ethics and transparency under diplomatic pressure.
Active beliefs
  • Current drug regimens are not helping and may be wasting precious time.
  • Medical realities must be communicated to command immediately — some decisions require authorization or oversight.
  • Saving a life is a paramount duty regardless of political consequences.
  • Chain-of-custody and procedure must be respected even amid crisis.
Character traits
decisive clinically honest morally urgent authoritative
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Clinically focused and alert; professional detachment with an undercurrent of urgency.

Medical supernumeraries are methodically taking DNA (TECH) samples from several crew members who reported for testing, moving through Sickbay with practiced efficiency while supporting triage and preparing specimens for analysis.

Goals in this moment
  • Collect accurate DNA samples quickly and maintain chain-of-custody.
  • Support senior medical staff by freeing them to concentrate on the critical patient.
  • Prepare diagnostic material that may inform treatment or diplomatic decisions.
Active beliefs
  • Rapid, accurate sampling is essential for diagnosis or compatibility testing.
  • Follow orders from senior medical officers without delay.
  • Maintaining sterile, labeled samples is critical for medical and legal integrity.
Character traits
methodical focused procedural efficient
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Beverly Crusher's Starfleet Insignia

Beverly Crusher's combadge is keyed to open a communications channel; it functions as the immediate tool that converts her clinical determination into a formal report to command, carrying her voice and authority to Captain Picard and thereby linking Sickbay to the bridge.

Before: Affixed to Dr. Crusher's medical tunic and inactive, …
After: Activated (keyed) to establish a compressed voice channel …
Before: Affixed to Dr. Crusher's medical tunic and inactive, with a faint status glow.
After: Activated (keyed) to establish a compressed voice channel to Captain Picard; status reflects an open, urgent communication.
Crew DNA Samples (Sickbay — Patahk Crisis)

A cluster of crew DNA samples is actively being produced and collected by technicians as diagnostic material; the vials function as potential keys for compatibility testing or identifying causes, and they materially represent the medical team's attempt to find objective answers amid a deteriorating patient.

Before: Crew members are in the process of providing …
After: Samples have been collected and remain on trays …
Before: Crew members are in the process of providing samples; vials are being filled, labeled, and staged on shallow trays beneath diagnostic lights.
After: Samples have been collected and remain on trays awaiting immediate analysis or refrigeration and chain-of-custody processing.
Sickbay Medical Drugs

Sickbay medical drugs — vials, syringes, and canisters — are the treatments currently being administered or staged; Doctor Crusher explicitly orders all drug administration stopped when she judges them ineffective, making the drugs the immediate subject of clinical cessation and narrative escalation.

Before: Medical drugs are prepared and being administered or …
After: Administration of the drugs is ordered halted by …
Before: Medical drugs are prepared and being administered or staged on trays as part of attempts to stabilize the Romulan patient.
After: Administration of the drugs is ordered halted by Dr. Crusher; the medications remain physically present but their use has been suspended pending command or further diagnostics.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Sickbay (USS Enterprise)

Enterprise Sickbay is the operational center for triage, diagnostics, and the contested moral moment: technicians collect DNA while senior medical staff monitor a critically wounded Romulan. The space shifts from purely clinical to a place where medical fact collides with command and diplomatic consequence.

Atmosphere Tension-filled, antiseptic, and urgent — clinical efficiency overlaid with compressed moral and command pressure.
Function Medical staging area and urgent triage zone where a medical determination triggers a command-level communication.
Symbolism Embodies the collision of Starfleet's humanitarian mission and institutional responsibility; the sickbay moment symbolizes the …
Access Restricted to medical staff and authorized personnel; activity is monitored and controlled given patient sensitivity …
Bright antiseptic lighting and stainless diagnostics Monitor beeps and the low thrum of ship systems Technicians moving with trays of labeled vials A combadge chime signaling an urgent comm

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Key Dialogue

"BEVERLY ((keys insignia)) I want him off all the drugs... they aren't doing anything... Doctor Crusher to Picard."