Narrative Web

First Contact at the Shuttle

Data, alone and unemotional, completes a covert scan of the shuttle site and then steps into view, startling four settlers. Their immediate recognition of Federation markings and Artemis ancestry humanizes Data to them and gives him an unexpected cultural foothold. The exchange establishes the first fragile line of communication between Starfleet and the colony, sets up Data's rhetorical leverage, and seeds the interpersonal cracks (Haritath, Kentor) that will allow evacuation persuasion to begin.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Data scans with his tricorder as Haritath and Kentor, with two workers, cautiously approach the shuttle, unaware of Data's presence.

anticipation to surprise ['shuttle landing site']

Haritath and Kentor react with wonder to the shuttlecraft, identifying its Federation markings.

curiosity to excitement ['shuttle landing site']

Data steps into view, startling the humans with his sudden appearance and android nature.

surprise to nervousness ['shuttle landing site']

Haritath and Kentor recognize Data as the first visitor ever, revealing their isolation and connection to the Federation through ancestors from the Artemis.

astonishment to pride

Haritath and Kentor offer to take Data to Gosheven, expressing their confidence in their accomplishments and heritage.

eagerness to expectation

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Haritath
primary

Enthusiastic and proud on the surface; slightly anxious that the visitors might not give them time or recognition.

Haritath approaches the shuttle eagerly, interprets the markings as Federation, expresses pride in ancestral ties, and tries to engage Data socially while also grasping that he may be on a schedule the visitors won't share.

Goals in this moment
  • Showcase the colony's legitimacy and achievements to the Federation representative.
  • Secure attention and possible aid or recognition from the Federation.
Active beliefs
  • The settlers' Federation ancestry confers honor and should create affinity with Starfleet.
  • Demonstrating accomplishments will make the Federation proud and sympathetic to their situation.
Character traits
excitable proud hopeful talkative
Follow Haritath's journey
Kentor
primary

Curious but controlled; intent on preserving communal protocol and avoiding rash personal commitments to outsiders.

Kentor steps forward with a pragmatic, measured tone: he notes this is the first visitor and immediately directs Data toward Gosheven, positioning the leader as the appropriate arbiter of any outside contact.

Goals in this moment
  • Ensure that any decisions or talks with outsiders are routed through Gosheven.
  • Protect the colony's social order by preventing premature promises or unilateral agreements.
Active beliefs
  • Gosheven, as the colony's leader, must be the one to receive and decide about external visitors.
  • Outsiders should be funneled into established channels to avoid destabilizing the community.
Character traits
pragmatic deferential to local authority calm concise
Follow Kentor's journey

Externally neutral and unemotional; internally focused on duty and information gathering with nascent curiosity about human social response.

Data conducts a covert environmental scan with his tricorder, then deliberately steps into sight and delivers a single courteous greeting before offering his rank and affiliation. His actions convert sensor-gathering into formal contact, supplying clear identification to the settlers.

Goals in this moment
  • Establish clear, verifiable contact with the colony.
  • Identify local leadership and gather information about the settlers' origins and status.
Active beliefs
  • Direct, factual disclosure (name/rank/affiliation) will engender trust and clarify Starfleet's purpose.
  • Finding the colony's leader is the most efficient route to resolving larger logistical or legal concerns.
Character traits
clinical methodical courteous socially probing
Follow Data's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Data's Tricorder

Data's tricorder is actively used to sweep the shuttle landing site, gathering atmospheric and life-sign data before he reveals himself. The tricorder's readings justify Data's confidence and enable him to engage without immediate risk, functioning as both tool and dramatic signal of his methodical approach.

Before: Operational and in Data's hand, emitting diagnostic tones …
After: Still in Data's possession and operational; continues to …
Before: Operational and in Data's hand, emitting diagnostic tones as it scans the landing area.
After: Still in Data's possession and operational; continues to function as Data moves from scanning to speaking with settlers.
Artemis (Colony Ship)

The colony ship Artemis is referenced verbally by Haritath as ancestral origin rather than appearing physically. Its invocation supplies historical legitimacy and emotional weight, converting Federation insignia on the shuttle into a genealogical bond that humanizes Data to the settlers.

Before: Absent physically; exists as remembered legacy and cultural …
After: Remains an invoked ancestral reference that shapes the …
Before: Absent physically; exists as remembered legacy and cultural identity among the colonists.
After: Remains an invoked ancestral reference that shapes the settlers' reception of Data and the shuttle.
Data's Evacuation Shuttle

The shuttle occupies the center of the scene: it blocks the settlers' initial view of Data, bears Federation markings that trigger Haritath's recognition, and physically stages the reveal when Data steps around it. The vessel is the tangible proof of Starfleet presence and origin.

Before: Landed and stationary at the clearing, partially obstructing …
After: Remains landed and intact; continues to serve as …
Before: Landed and stationary at the clearing, partially obstructing sightlines between Data and the approaching settlers.
After: Remains landed and intact; continues to serve as the material representation of Starfleet affiliation while occupants and colonists converse nearby.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 2
Character Continuity medium

"Ard'rian's initial fascination with Data's android nature culminates in her emotional attachment to him, despite his lack of emotions."

Departure and the Unfelt Goodbye
S3E2 · The Ensigns of Command
Character Continuity medium

"Ard'rian's initial fascination with Data's android nature culminates in her emotional attachment to him, despite his lack of emotions."

Measured Goodbye: Data's Calculated Farewell
S3E2 · The Ensigns of Command

Key Dialogue

"HARITATH: "A shuttlecraft!""
"DATA: "Hello.""
"DATA: "That is correct. I am an android. I am Lieutenant Commander Data of the Federation Starship Enterprise.""