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Deal Sealed Amid Last-Minute Tweaks, Team Rushes to Motorcade

In the chaotic final minutes before the State of the Union, Toby directs speechwriters to excise inflammatory words like 'vigorously' and 'chokehold' to placate Senator McGowan. Sam clinches the crucial Blue Ribbon Commission support via phone, trading highway funds and a park naming, which Leo rigorously confirms before Bartlet greenlights it. Nervous energy peaks as the team surges from the Oval Office to the waiting motorcade—Sam and Toby to the lead limo, Bartlet, Leo, and Charlie to the middle—propelling the story from prep frenzy to high-stakes address.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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The team rushes to the motorcade, with Sam and Toby heading to the front limo, while Bartlet, Leo, and Charlie enter the middle car, signaling the urgency of the moment.

urgency to momentum ['North Entrance']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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C.J. Cregg
primary

Implied anticipatory

C.J. targeted by Toby's directive via Ginger to receive Blue Ribbon greenlight, poised for briefing room rollout.

Goals in this moment
  • Announce Blue Ribbon triumph
  • Shield agenda from scandal
Active beliefs
  • Timed reveals seize narrative
  • Greenlights demand swift relay
Character traits
strategic comms
Follow C.J. Cregg's journey

Nervous tension exploding into triumphant relief

Sam paces nervously in Outer Oval on phone, glances at watch, seals Blue Ribbon deal with McGowan via SP 380 and park trades, pumps fist triumphantly, joins crowd to explain to Leo, then heads to lead limo with Toby.

Goals in this moment
  • Secure Blue Ribbon Commission support
  • Confirm deal details for Leo and President
Active beliefs
  • Horse-trading advances ideals
  • Precision clinches legislative wins
Character traits
tenacious witty principled
Follow Sam Seaborn's journey

Focused intensity driving deadline precision

Toby rushes with Ginger into Oval, sharply directs Pettit and speechwriters to delete 'vigorously' from para 367 and change 'chokehold' to 'tight grip' for McGowan, updates Bartlet, instructs Ginger on C.J., joins Sam to lead limo.

Goals in this moment
  • Placate McGowan with speech tweaks
  • Greenlight Blue Ribbon announcement via Ginger
Active beliefs
  • Compromise sharpens rhetoric
  • Last-second cuts seize high ground
Character traits
surgical combative urgent
Follow Toby Ziegler's journey

Quiet competence masking shared tension

Charlie follows Bartlet into Oval, helps him into suit jacket amid visible nerves, twice confirms 'Yes sir' on Abbey's seating, then enters middle limo with Leo and Bartlet.

Goals in this moment
  • Assist President's prep
  • Verify Abbey's presence
Active beliefs
  • Personal steadiness bolsters leader
  • Protocol eases pre-speech jitters
Character traits
poised attentive unflappable
Follow Charlie Young's journey

Implied poised readiness

Abbey referenced as already seated, queried twice by nervous Bartlet via Charlie's confirmations, underscoring familial anchor amid executive launch.

Goals in this moment
  • Attend SOTU in seat
  • Bolster President's focus
Active beliefs
  • Family steadies power's edge
  • Presence reassures ritual
Character traits
supportive presence
Follow Abigail Bartlet's journey

Calm professionalism amid mounting frenzy

Mrs. Landingham quickly moves through the frenetic Outer Oval Office with other staffers, embodying poised efficiency amid the ticking countdown chaos as Sam paces on phone and Toby rushes directives.

Goals in this moment
  • Facilitate smooth staff movement
  • Maintain operational flow in crisis
Active beliefs
  • Discipline anchors chaos
  • Routine sustains high-stakes moments
Character traits
composed efficient gatekeeping
Follow Dolores Landingham's journey
Ginger
primary

Alert readiness in high-velocity relay

Ginger rushes by with Toby into Oval, receives directive to inform C.J. of Blue Ribbon greenlight, affirms 'Yes sir' and takes off running amid the surging crowd.

Goals in this moment
  • Relay Toby's message to C.J.
  • Execute without delay
Active beliefs
  • Speed sustains comms chain
  • Direct orders propel team wins
Character traits
swift precise loyal
Follow Ginger's journey
Pettit
primary

Primed focus under pressure

Pettit snaps 'Yeah' in immediate response to Toby's summons and editing directive on 'vigorously,' fueling the rapid speech revisions in Oval frenzy.

Goals in this moment
  • Implement Toby's speech cuts
  • Meet countdown deadline
Active beliefs
  • Accuracy in tweaks advances agenda
  • Chain of command delivers rhetoric
Character traits
compliant precise
Follow Pettit's journey

Steady assurance in crisis

Speechwriter 1 crisply affirms 'Yeah' to confirm edits complete after Toby's 'chokehold' to 'tight grip' order, anchoring the speechwriting scrum amid time warnings.

Goals in this moment
  • Finalize speech changes
  • Support Toby's McGowan placation
Active beliefs
  • Terse confirmations stabilize frenzy
  • Refined language wins votes
Character traits
reliable concise
Follow Speechwriter 1's journey
Bob Novak
primary

Implied approving acclaim

Bob Novak invoked by Bartlet citing his TV praise as 'speech of my political life,' injecting vindicating pundit buzz into Oval tension.

Goals in this moment
  • Evaluate SOTU impact
  • Shape public narrative
Active beliefs
  • Bartlet's rhetoric peaks career
  • Media verdict legitimizes
Character traits
influential pundit
Follow Bob Novak's journey
McGowan
primary

Appeased by concessions

Senator McGowan referenced as placated by speech tweaks ('vigorously' inflammatory, now fine), enabling Sam's deal via off-screen leverage.

Goals in this moment
  • Extract speech softening
  • Secure pork for Blue Ribbon vote
Active beliefs
  • Concessions buy swing votes
  • Language wars gridlock policy
Character traits
brinkmanship demanding
Follow McGowan's journey

Implied procedural gravitas

Edgar Finney invoked by TV reporter as Doorkeeper delivering ritual SOTU introduction, heightening countdown ritual.

Goals in this moment
  • Execute House protocol
  • Introduce President
Active beliefs
  • Speaker permission gates power
  • Ritual elevates address
Character traits
ceremonial traditional
Follow Edgar Finney's journey

nervous

entering while rolling down sleeves, inquiring on status, greenlighting speech edits and deal, looking nervous as helped into suit jacket, confirming Abbey's presence

Goals in this moment
  • greenlight speech edits and Blue Ribbon deal to proceed to State of the Union
Character traits
protective resolute self-aware principled
Follow Josiah Bartlet's journey

speaking on TV about the State of the Union address and protocols

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Mrs. Landingham's Outer Oval Landline Phone

Mrs. Landingham's Outer Oval Landline Phone serves as Sam's urgent negotiation lifeline to McGowan, clinching Blue Ribbon deal with SP 380 trades; he grips it pacing nervously, glances watch mid-call, declares 'yes' and hangs up, thrusting momentum into crowd confirmation.

Before: Idle on desk, available in Outer Oval
After: Hung up, abandoned as team surges to hallway
Before: Idle on desk, available in Outer Oval
After: Hung up, abandoned as team surges to hallway
Outer Oval Office Televisions

Outer Oval Office Television broadcasts reporter on SOTU protocols and Edgar Finney intro, with Novak's praise cited by Bartlet; it underscores ticking six-minute countdown, blending external ritual with internal frenzy.

Before: On in corner, reporter speaking
After: Still broadcasting as office empties
Before: On in corner, reporter speaking
After: Still broadcasting as office empties
Sam's Wristwatch

Sam's Wristwatch draws his anxious glance mid-phone negotiation, its face amplifying four-minute warnings from speechwriters, compressing deal pressure into visceral time scarcity propelling motorcade haste.

Before: Worn on wrist during pacing
After: Still on wrist en route to limo
Before: Worn on wrist during pacing
After: Still on wrist en route to limo
Bartlet's Suit Jacket

Bartlet's Suit Jacket is lifted by Charlie onto his rolled sleeves amid nervous entry, settling as reluctant armor symbolizing transition from prep vulnerability to podium command.

Before: Aside in Oval, sleeves rolled
After: Worn by Bartlet entering middle limo
Before: Aside in Oval, sleeves rolled
After: Worn by Bartlet entering middle limo
SP 380 Highway Bill

SP 380 Highway Bill emerges as Sam's bargaining chip in phone deal explanation to Leo, White House weight pledged alongside park naming to lock Blue Ribbon support, embodying raw pork quid pro quo.

Before: Legislative concept in negotiation
After: Greenlit commitment, advancing to implementation
Before: Legislative concept in negotiation
After: Greenlit commitment, advancing to implementation
Presidential Motorcade Limousines

Presidential Motorcade Limousines wait idling at North Entrance; team splits—Sam/Toby to front, Bartlet/Leo/Charlie to middle, rest to rear—doors slamming as engines thrum, hurtling frenzy toward Capitol.

Before: Parked in formation, engines running
After: Occupied and departing for House
Before: Parked in formation, engines running
After: Occupied and departing for House

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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West Wing Corridor (Exterior Hallway Outside Leo McGarry's Office)

West Wing Hallway channels the surging crowd post-edits and deal confirm, Leo grilling Sam amid rapid strides, Toby dispatching Ginger, compressing verification into motorcade thrust.

Atmosphere Echoing with hurried footsteps and clipped queries
Function Transit corridor for team mobilization
Symbolism Nerve conduit from Oval command to external launch
Access White House staff passage
Dim night lighting Linoleum echoes Crowd compression
President Bartlet's Motorcade

President Bartlet's Motorcade outside North Entrance idles as armored phalanx, absorbing split team into lead/middle/rear cars, engines growling launch to SOTU under starless sky.

Atmosphere Predatory restraint building to surge
Function Secure transport to address venue
Symbolism Steel veil over human nerves
Access Principals and aides stratified by vehicle
Thrumming engines Open doors Formation discipline
North Entrance

North Entrance frames the climactic exit to waiting limousines, team scattering to vehicles in disciplined split, marking pivot from internal chaos to Capitol convoy.

Atmosphere Taut with departure adrenaline
Function Exit point to motorcade
Symbolism Gateway breaching White House sanctuary
Access Secure presidential egress
Parked limo lineup Night shadows Slammed doors

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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U.S. House of Representatives

U.S. House of Representatives looms as SOTU destination, TV detailing Finney's intro and floor entry rites, framing the frenzy toward tiered benches and applause crucible.

Representation Via Doorkeeper protocol on TV
Power Dynamics Hosts executive spectacle under sovereign rules
Impact Anchors national oratory stage
Uphold address traditions Position for policy reception Ceremonial barriers Broadcast anticipation
Congress

Congress invoked via TV protocols (Speaker permission, Finney intro) and McGowan's speech veto power, its procedural gates and swing votes dictating White House tweaks and deals.

Representation Through senatorial demands and ritual broadcast
Power Dynamics Wields gatekeeping over executive address
Impact Highlights separation of powers friction
Internal Dynamics Senatorial brinkmanship vs. House ceremony
Extract concessions Enforce legislative protocol Word choice vetoes Permission rituals
Blue Ribbon Commission on Reform

Blue Ribbon Commission crystallizes as prize of Sam's phone deal, Leo confirming SP 380/park trades for support, Toby greenlighting C.J. announcement via Ginger, propelling SOTU policy win.

Representation Via White House negotiation proxy
Power Dynamics Sought via concessions to Senate leverage
Impact Exposes razor margins in policy advisory formation
Secure congressional backing Enable elite advisory launch Vote trading Pork inducements

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

What this causes 3
Causal

"Sam's deal with Senator McGowan directly leads to the announcement of the Blue Ribbon Commission during the State of the Union address."

C.J. Brushes Off Press on Last-Minute Commission and Capital Beat Perks
S2E13 · Bartlet's Third State of the …
Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet's visible nerves before the State of the Union address contrast with his composed demeanor when sharing a prayerful moment with Charlie, highlighting his personal reliance on his aide for support."

Locking the Softened SOTU Speech and Presidential Handover
S2E13 · Bartlet's Third State of the …
Character Continuity medium

"Bartlet's visible nerves before the State of the Union address contrast with his composed demeanor when sharing a prayerful moment with Charlie, highlighting his personal reliance on his aide for support."

Bartlet's Nervous Ritual and Regal Entrance
S2E13 · Bartlet's Third State of the …

Key Dialogue

"TOBY: "Delete 'vigorously' from the first sentence." LEO: "Which paragraph?" TOBY: "367.""
"SAM (into phone): "I'm gonna tell him it's a yes." [pumps fist in air]"
"LEO: "I want to be clear. This is the understanding that we build him a highway and name a park after him and we have the support for the Blue Ribbon?" SAM: "Yep.""