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S3E11
· The Hunted

Geordi's Alarm — Double Security and a Jefferies Trap

Shaken but lucid in Engineering, Geordi reports that Roga Danar moved with terrifying speed—his initial stun a clear tactical success—and the breach is no longer contained. Data picks up an open access panel on Deck 30, and Worf identifies Danar's likely objective: Shuttlebay Two. Geordi, refusing to underestimate the engineered soldier, demands security be doubled, turning a localized incident into a ship‑wide containment order. Simultaneously, Danar rigs a phaser inside a Jefferies tube—initial seed of sabotage and misdirection that converts pursuit into a deadly, disorienting hunt. This scene functions as a turning point: it forces immediate escalation, exposes vulnerabilities, and sets up the lethal cat‑and‑mouse that will define the manhunt.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Geordi, shaken from a phaser stun, delivers a warning about Danar's terrifying speed and unpredictability, revealing the first tactical failure against their adversary.

disorientation to alarm ['Engineering']

Geordi, having witnessed Danar's lethality firsthand, insists on doubling security—his tone conveying more threat assessment than Starfleet protocol.

caution to insistence

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Neutral and methodical — Data supplies facts without emotional color, enabling others to assign valence and urgency.

Through the comm, Data reports an open access panel (K-twelve, Deck 30), providing the analytic sensor readout that identifies a precise breach point and guides the tactical response.

Goals in this moment
  • Provide accurate, real-time sensor data to inform shipboard decisions.
  • Pinpoint the intruder's route to allow interception.
Active beliefs
  • Objective sensor interpretation is critical to resolving security breaches.
  • Precise localization (deck and panel) materially increases interception probability.
Character traits
analytical dispassionate observant detail-oriented
Follow Data's journey

Controlled and duty-bound; focused on executing protocol rather than expressing surprise.

Receives Data's comm, acknowledges the open panel readout succinctly, relays the tactical conclusion that Danar is likely attempting to reach Shuttlebay Two, and reports that security contingents are posted at shuttlebays.

Goals in this moment
  • Coordinate shipboard security response to intercept Danar.
  • Provide factual, actionable sensor reports to command without speculation.
Active beliefs
  • Orderly deployment of Security is the correct counter to an internal threat.
  • Clear, concise reporting accelerates effective containment.
Character traits
disciplined tactically focused laconic authoritative
Follow Worf's journey

Shaken and urgent — outwardly composed technical focus masking a real alarm at the tactical implications of what he witnessed.

Sitting up in Engineering after being stunned, Geordi rapidly assesses Danar's capabilities, vocalizes alarm at Danar's speed, scans the reactor shaft, and explicitly advises doubling security to close the breach.

Goals in this moment
  • Prevent Roga Danar from reaching Shuttlebay Two and escaping the ship.
  • Close vulnerabilities and ensure Security increases force allocation where needed.
Active beliefs
  • Danar's demonstrated physical abilities make him a severe and immediate threat.
  • Procedural escalation (doubling security) is the most effective immediate response to a fast-moving breach.
Character traits
practical hyper-vigilant technically precise protective of ship integrity
Follow Geordi La …'s journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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William Riker's Starfleet Insignia

A Starfleet combadge-style insignia emits an alert tone, functioning as the immediate communications trigger that brings Worf into the loop and allows Data's sensor readout to be transmitted to Engineering. The beep is the literal crack in ambient noise that starts tactical coordination.

Before: Affixed to a security officer's uniform, active with …
After: Recently triggered; remains operational and continues to carry …
Before: Affixed to a security officer's uniform, active with a faint status glow, idle until sensor or comm event.
After: Recently triggered; remains operational and continues to carry comm traffic as security and bridge coordinate responses.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Main Engineering

Main Engineering is the scene of immediate recovery: Geordi shakes off a phaser stun and converts shock into tactical advice. The bay functions as the nerve center for diagnostics and command decisions, where sensor data is digested and escalation orders originate.

Atmosphere Tense, electrically charged — humming with reactor throbs, punctuated by alarm klaxons and terse technical …
Function Command and analysis hub for responding to the breach and coordinating shipboard security.
Symbolism Represents the ship's technical heart and the vulnerability that Danar exploited; its bustle underscores the …
Access Generally restricted to engineering personnel and senior officers; in crisis mode, security and emergency teams …
reactor core shaft visible; amber LCARS consoles; technicians stunned; scent of ozone and hot metal alarm klaxons and urgent chatter punctuate the space
Main Shuttle Bay

Shuttlebay Two is identified as Danar's likely objective and thus becomes the focal defensive point, with a full contingent of security reported waiting there. It represents the potential exit and therefore the most critical interception location.

Atmosphere Alert and prepared in report — described as guarded and primed for an encounter even …
Function Primary interception point and potential battleground if Danar reaches it.
Symbolism Symbolizes the boundary between ship and freedom — the line Danar aims to cross and …
Access Heavily guarded and functioning as a secure choke point; access limited to authorized security teams …
ribbed bulkheads and overhead gantries (implied) security posts clustered at airlocks and sensor sweeps active (implied)
Jefferies Tube

The Jefferies tube is the literal tunnel of the chase: cramped, intersecting conduits provide both route and weaponization substrate. Danar uses the tube's dense bundling of waveguides to rig a phaser into the ship's infrastructure, turning a maintenance corridor into a trap.

Atmosphere Claustrophobic, metallic, and intimate — the confined space magnifies each mechanical sound and makes movement …
Function Escape route for the intruder and site of sabotage and ambush.
Symbolism Embodies the ship's internal arteries — normally hidden but suddenly exposed as the pathway where …
Access Normally accessible only to maintenance personnel and engineers; in this event it is a forbidden, …
ribbed duranium walls and bundled waveguides sputtering fluorescent strips, recycled stale air, echoing footsteps

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Key Dialogue

"GEORDI: "He surprised us... came out of nowhere. I didn't know anyone could move that fast...""
"DATA (com): "Lieutenant, I am reading an open access panel... K-twelve, deck thirty.""
"GEORDI: "You want my advice... double it.""