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Data Tears Himself Apart to Make a Demonstration

Inside the shuttle, Data literally opens his forearm and cannibalizes servocircuits and neural subprocessors to improvise a servocircuit that will keep a phaser functioning in hyperonic radiation. Ard'rian watches, alternately fascinated and horrified, as Data finishes the jury-rigged weapon and orders him to tell Gosheven he will destroy the aqueduct. The act is a turning point: Data abandons persuasion for provocation, paying a personal, visible cost to force the colony into a moral and practical confrontation about survival.

Plot Beats

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Data reveals his plan to adapt a phaser by cannibalizing his own servocircuits to overcome the hyperonic radiation interference.

technical determination to fascination ['shuttlecraft interior']

Ard'rian expresses admiration for Data's ingenuity as he utilizes his own neural subprocessors to modify the weapon.

fascination to acknowledgment ['shuttlecraft interior']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Ard'rian
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Torn between awe at Data's skill and shock at the brutality of his decision; stunned, conflicted, and momentarily speechless.

Ard'rian watches in the shuttle's confined space as Data cannibalizes his arm components, reacts with a mix of fascination and horror, and receives Data's instruction to tell Gosheven about the impending attack, struggling to reply.

Goals in this moment
  • Understand and assist the technical improvisation where possible
  • Process and respond to the ethical shock of Data's threat—either to stop it or to carry out his orders
Active beliefs
  • Data's abilities are extraordinary and can solve problems others cannot
  • Destroying the aqueduct would be a catastrophic action with real human consequences that must be prevented if possible
Character traits
technical curiosity moral discomfort protective instinct quiet courage
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Not shown on stage; inferred as defiant and resistant to outside orders, which invites confrontation.

Gosheven is not physically present but is directly implicated: Data orders that he be informed that the aqueduct will be destroyed should he refuse evacuation, making Gosheven the intended target of coercion and moral choice.

Goals in this moment
  • Maintain local authority and the colony's claim to land and infrastructure (inferred)
  • Resist forced evacuation and preserve communal memory and autonomy (inferred)
Active beliefs
  • The colony's history and sacrifices legitimize staying on the land (inferred)
  • External threats to sovereignty must be met with local resolve (inferred)
Character traits
authoritarian stance (inferred) defiant leadership (inferred)
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Controlled and resolute with a clinical affect; beneath the surface lies moral urgency turned into deliberate coercion.

Data opens his forearm, extracts servocircuits and neural subprocessors, integrates them into a phaser assembly, explains the technical rationale, and issues a blunt, strategic threat ordering Gosheven notified.

Goals in this moment
  • Restore phaser function so it will operate reliably under hyperonic radiation
  • Escalate pressure on the colony by threatening infrastructure to force evacuation compliance
Active beliefs
  • Technical improvisation can translate into leverage over human political choices
  • The preservation of lives justifies personal bodily damage and moral provocation
Character traits
clinical determination instrumental pragmatism willingness to self‑sacrifice calculated provocation
Follow Data's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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USS Enterprise Phasers

A phaser (represented here by the canonical phaser system) is opened and adapted; the salvaged servocircuit is wired into its control path to continuously recollimate the beam in the presence of hyperonic interference, turning it into a reliable threat weapon.

Before: A handheld phaser rendered unreliable by hyperonic radiation, …
After: Modified with Data's improvised servocircuit and neural elements, …
Before: A handheld phaser rendered unreliable by hyperonic radiation, in the shuttle's work area being inspected and inactive.
After: Modified with Data's improvised servocircuit and neural elements, now operationalized as a phaser capable of functioning under hyperonic conditions and ready to be used as a coercive instrument.
Cygna Five Colony Aqueduct

The colony aqueduct is invoked as the threatened target: a communal water conduit whose destruction would cripple the settlement. It functions narratively as leverage—threatened infrastructure to force moral choice and collective evacuation.

Before: Intact and serving as the colony's water conduit, …
After: Remains physically unchanged within the scene, but now …
Before: Intact and serving as the colony's water conduit, publicly visible and politically significant.
After: Remains physically unchanged within the scene, but now placed under an explicit threat of destruction that alters the colony's strategic and moral calculus.
Data's Cannibalized Servocircuit

Data's cannibalized servocircuit is physically removed from his forearm, examined and reconfigured as the core stabilizing element in the phaser assembly. Narratively, it functions as the literal price Data pays—his own components become the instrument of coercion.

Before: Installed inside Data's forearm as an internal servocircuit …
After: Removed from Data's forearm, reconfigured and integrated into …
Before: Installed inside Data's forearm as an internal servocircuit and neural subprocessor, integral to his limb's normal operation.
After: Removed from Data's forearm, reconfigured and integrated into the jury‑rigged phaser; the original module is now external and altered.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Shuttlecraft Cockpit

The shuttlecraft cockpit is the confined workspace where Data performs mechanical surgery on his arm and adapts the phaser; its cramped intimacy makes the technical act viscerally immediate and the moral ultimatum unavoidable.

Atmosphere Tense, claustrophobic, and clinical—metallic hums and the smell of warmed circuitry underline the intimacy of …
Function Pressure‑cooker for private technical improvisation and the staging ground for Data's deliberate escalation.
Symbolism Represents the narrow moral space in which technical capability becomes coercive leverage; the cockpit compresses …
Access Confined to Data and Ard'rian in this moment; not a public space.
Close quarters forcing physical proximity between Data and Ard'rian Warm circuitry smell, low hum of shuttle systems Workbench or open phaser components, exposed wiring and Data's opened forearm
Main Street Pumping and Purification Station

The Main Street Pumping Station is cited as the rendezvous and threatened action point where Data says he will come to destroy the aqueduct; though not onscreen, it functions as the implied battleground for the forthcoming confrontation.

Atmosphere Not physically present in the scene but imagined as a civic, exposed place that will …
Function Staging ground and symbolic locus for direct confrontation between Data (and Starfleet imperative) and Gosheven's …
Symbolism Embodies communal infrastructure and the locus of local sovereignty; threatened destruction would expose the cost …
Access Public and central to the colony—accessible to villagers and their leader; will become contested once …
Open public presence with exposed valves and humming pumps (implied) A public square feel where political authority is displayed (implied)

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Key Dialogue

"DATA: Hyperonic radiation randomizes phaser beams. But I believe I can improvise a servocircuit which will compensate by continuously recollimating the output."
"ARD'RIAN: You're using your own neural subprocessors to build a smarter phaser."
"DATA: Get word to Gosheven. Tell him I am coming to the pumping station. Tell him I am going to destroy the aqueduct."