Narrative Web
S2E18
· 17 People

Toby Ambushes Leo Over Hoynes' Suspicious Polling

In the dim confines of Leo's office, Toby lies in wait on the couch, startling Leo upon his entry. Toby aggressively confronts him about Vice President Hoynes' recent polling, probing its suspicious timing amid re-election tensions. Leo, visibly unsettled, deflects by rationalizing it as routine future planning and claims ignorance, physically distancing himself. Toby pushes back skeptically but utters a reluctant 'Okay,' his unresolved doubts fueling his obsessive investigation into Hoynes' ambitions—a pivotal setup exposing administration fractures and foreshadowing the explosive MS secret revelation.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Leo enters his office, startled to find Toby waiting for him in the dark.

calm to startled ["Leo's office"]

Toby immediately confronts Leo about Hoynes' suspicious polling activity.

startled to defensive

Leo deflects Toby's concerns about Hoynes' polling as routine political activity.

defensive to dismissive

Toby challenges Leo's explanation, pointing out the illogical timing of Hoynes' polling.

dismissive to confrontational

Leo admits ignorance about Hoynes' motives, physically distancing himself from Toby.

confrontational to evasive

Toby accepts Leo's answer with visible skepticism, setting up continued investigation.

evasive to suspicious

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Presumed opportunistic confidence from afar

Absent but centrally invoked in Toby's accusations and Leo's deflections as the architect of the suspicious recent poll, fueling the ambush's core conflict over premature electoral maneuvering.

Goals in this moment
  • Test re-election viability through covert polling
  • Position for 2002 presidential contention
Active beliefs
  • Early polling secures strategic advantage
  • Bartlet's vulnerabilities enable Hoynes' ascent
Character traits
ambitious calculating
Follow John Hoynes's journey

Terrified jolt shifting to feigned casualness masking guarded unease

Enters office routinely picking up mail and turning on light, recoils terrified at Toby's ambush, raises head defensively, deflects poll query by rationalizing Hoynes' future needs and claiming ignorance, physically bypasses Toby to create distance amid rising tension.

Goals in this moment
  • Shut down Toby's probe to protect secrets
  • Normalize Hoynes' actions as routine politics
Active beliefs
  • Hoynes' polling is standard long-term preparation
  • Revealing more risks unraveling fragile unity
Character traits
evasive defensive composed guarded
Follow Leo Thomas …'s journey

Intensely skeptical and frustrated, veiled by calculated restraint

Lurking silently on the couch in pre-lit shadows, Toby initiates with a casual 'Hey' to startle Leo, rises aggressively to confront him on Hoynes' poll timing, presses skepticism on its futility six years out, concedes with reluctant 'Okay,' and narrates voice-over doubt amplifying unresolved suspicions.

Goals in this moment
  • Force Leo to reveal knowledge of Hoynes' polling motives
  • Validate suspicions of premature disloyalty amid re-election fragility
Active beliefs
  • Poll's timing signals Hoynes' active challenge to Bartlet
  • Leo's deflections hide deeper administration fractures
Character traits
aggressive skeptical obsessive persistent
Follow Toby Ziegler's journey

Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Leo's Incoming Mail Bundle

Leo snatches the crisp, dog-eared bundle from desk or entry upon entering, a mundane bureaucratic anchor grounding his routine before Toby's ambush erupts; it subtly splays under accusation's weight, contrasting normalcy with the brewing betrayal storm and Hoynes probe.

Before: Stacked untouched on desk or entry point in …
After: In Leo's possession, carried as he walks by …
Before: Stacked untouched on desk or entry point in dim office.
After: In Leo's possession, carried as he walks by Toby.
Hoynes' Recent Poll

Toby wields the unseen poll as accusatory weapon, hammering its 'last week's' timing against six-year election horizon to expose Hoynes' ambitions; Leo rationalizes it away, but it lingers as spectral clue sharpening fractures, propelling Toby's obsession toward MS revelation.

Before: Recently fielded by Hoynes, results fueling suspicion.
After: Remains off-screen but amplified as doubt's catalyst.
Before: Recently fielded by Hoynes, results fueling suspicion.
After: Remains off-screen but amplified as doubt's catalyst.
Leo's Office Light

Leo flips the switch post-mail grab, igniting harsh overhead or desk illumination that slashes shadows, glaring unforgivingly on Toby's couch ambush and clenched confrontation—heightening stark exposure of loyalty strains amid poll deflections.

Before: Off, enveloping office in ambush-enabling dimness.
After: On, humming alive to bathe tense exchange in …
Before: Off, enveloping office in ambush-enabling dimness.
After: On, humming alive to bathe tense exchange in clarity.

Narrative Connections

How this event relates to others in the story

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Causal medium

"Toby's initial questioning about Hoynes' polling leads to his deeper investigation into Hoynes' itinerary and political maneuvering."

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Character Continuity medium

"Leo's consistent deflection and discomfort when questioned about Hoynes' actions."

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Escalation

"Toby's challenge to Leo's explanation escalates to his direct linking of Hoynes' 'camping trip' to political campaigning."

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NARRATIVELY_FOLLOWS medium

"Toby's ambush of Leo in the dark office follows his earlier confrontation about Hoynes' polling activity."

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Thematic Parallel

"Toby's voice-over questioning the historical precedent of a Vice President challenging a sitting President parallels his decoding of Hoynes' political moves."

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Thematic Parallel

"Toby's voice-over questioning the historical precedent of a Vice President challenging a sitting President parallels his decoding of Hoynes' political moves."

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Thematic Parallel

"Toby's voice-over questioning the historical precedent of a Vice President challenging a sitting President parallels his decoding of Hoynes' political moves."

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Themes This Exemplifies

Thematic resonance and meaning

Key Dialogue

"TOBY: "The poll that Hoynes put in the field...""
"LEO: "Hoynes is going to run for President one day. Why shouldn't he do his own polling?""
"TOBY: "He's going to run for President six years from now, what good does last weeks' do?" LEO: "I really don't know.""